The Story Critic - Comments, page 2

Hi could you please read my story? It is called Still the One and it is PG-13 I am @swimprincessj thanks

Could you review my story, "The Fire in his Eyes" when you have the chance please? thank you love :)

@UniqueMOFO_11
Thanx ^_^

@HipstaGurl

Sure!

Can you do my story "To: Prince Charming"

Little Black Dress? :)

Can you please do my story " Behind the mask"

@Beany Baby!

I just did yours.

@Beany Baby!

I will do yours buts going to have to be on my other review place. Sorry :)

I think you already got mine, but can you read the chapters I've posted so far so I meet the requirements? There's only 2, maybe 3 depending on when you read it

Can you please do my story "Marcel." Can you read the first 3 or 4 chapters and tell me what you think?

@ELMO
We don't do supernatural.

Helloo can you review my story 'Dollhouse', i dont care how many chapters you read all i want is a truthfull review on my story so far. Thanks

Okay I get your point I would be frustrated to....BUT I don't write supernatural crap (well at least not yet) and I really want your opinion(s). Now I know you said only six chapters but I would really appreciate if you read all of I Saved His Life (there's like 27 chap. But they are pretty short) you don't have to read Stranded (it's a lot shorter) if you don't want to but I put a lot of time into these fanfics and I would like it if you gave it your honest, no sugar and spice, opinion. Thanx!
-Sarah

hey can you review his queen my story please will you read the first 6 chapters I would be ever so grateful thanks

Hey I was wondering if you would review my story Just Your Average Girl? It's a Niall fanfiction and I am actually pretty proud of how it is so far, and I wanted to know what you think of it. If you want to know how many chapters to read the most you will read is probably the best (so like you said 6) and just tell me what you think please :) don't be afraid to be brutality honest! Thanks!

Since you have new rules, here's my application hah xD
I only have 4 chapters so (x
it's a Zayn fanfic.
I put a lot of time into this.
It's not half ass. Please tell me what you think (x
Its called Everything Has Changed.

I was wondering if you could review my story EXTRAordinary?

Hiya! I vas wonderin' if ya could read my stories and tell me what you think.
P.S. They're I Saved His Life, and Stranded (the pg one) thanx!!

Hiya! I vas wonderin' if ya could read my stories and tell me what you think.
P.S. They're I Saved His Life, and Stranded (the pg one) thanx!!