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Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !
Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !
please review my story: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/39122/Gone/
thanks x
Hey girl!!
(Yes it's me, Secret123 from MCL...just making everything crystal clear...no pun intented)
Could you preettty pwease review http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/33294/Kiss-Me-Stupid/ <- that fanfiction??
Thanks C:
(It's my first fiction)
*yay*
could you please review The mentally brave?
Thank you so much =)
Hi! I was wondering wether you could review my story?
I haven't finished it but here's the link anyway:
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/30254/Im-Birdie/
Thanks for considering this! :)
Can you review my story The Outsiders? It only has two chapters though. Could you tell me how I could improve my writing in the review?
This is mine http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/10669/Dare-To-Love/ Please give it a chance?
plz check out my story it's called "inspirational messages" and take your time I don't care when you review it as long as you do thanks so much
3/10/15