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The Story Critic - Comments

plz check out my story it's called "inspirational messages" and take your time I don't care when you review it as long as you do thanks so much

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !

Plz review my story! Its called it started on that farm thx!!

Hey girl!!
(Yes it's me, Secret123 from MCL...just making everything crystal clear...no pun intented)
Could you preettty pwease review http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/33294/Kiss-Me-Stupid/ <- that fanfiction??
Thanks C:
(It's my first fiction)
*yay*

could you please review The mentally brave?
Thank you so much =)

Hi! I was wondering wether you could review my story?
I haven't finished it but here's the link anyway:
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/30254/Im-Birdie/

Thanks for considering this! :)

Can you review my story Hiding the Cracks please:)

Please, review 'The Girl Who Waited.'

Can you review my story The Outsiders? It only has two chapters though. Could you tell me how I could improve my writing in the review?

@UniqueMOFO
Merry Christmas to you too! :)

Could you review My Punk please? Thanks

Could you review My Punm please? Thanks

Review my story, Blowing Kisses? Thanks!

@Zaynlove

No problem and merry Christmas! :)

@UniqueMOFO
yay, thanks so much.

@Zaynlove

Done n___n

Can you please review Live While We're Young? Thanks! ~Belle~