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The Story Critic - Comments, page 4

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Hey maybe you could rate my story maybe? It's called The Bad Boy and The New Girl I sorta ended it but I think you could tell me if it is good enough to continue
tellmetomlinson tellmetomlinson @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/3/13
Hey maybe you could rate my story maybe? It's called The Bad Boy and The New Girl I sorta ended it but I think you could tell me if it is good enough to continue
tellmetomlinson tellmetomlinson @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/3/13
Could u co author my story if u can it's called The Bad Boy and The New Girl
tellmetomlinson tellmetomlinson @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/3/13
can you read my story? is called Looking forward
Aaliyah_Styles Aaliyah_Styles @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/1/13
Cna you please rate my story "live while we're young"? its my first fanfic and i was wondering what i could do to improve it! thanks!!!
onedirectionultimatefan onedirectionultimatefan @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/1/13
can you rate my story "Let you Down"?
strippingwithstyles strippingwithstyles @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/1/13
@Bella Christine

okay :D
UniqueMOFO UniqueMOFO @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/1/13
@Unique_11
Could you review my story she's not afraid please?
Bella Christine Bella Christine @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/1/13
tHANK YOU SO MUCH :)

@Unique_11

ELMO ELMO @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/1/13
@ELMO

okay!
UniqueMOFO UniqueMOFO @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/1/13
@Unique_11

Awwh, thanks :) Cant wait for my review ♥
Lee_Loves_Looouiiss Lee_Loves_Looouiiss @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/1/13
Can you read my fanfic that im currently writing 'Dollhouse', its a supernatural 1D type of story and it has a hidden message behind the characters. Thanxx
ELMO ELMO @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/1/13
@Lee_Loves_Looouiiss

of course! I just read your new chapter :D
UniqueMOFO UniqueMOFO @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/1/13
Can you do my story Abused?
Lee_Loves_Looouiiss Lee_Loves_Looouiiss @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/1/13
Hey, can u help me out with mine? Its called Amour, a Louis fanfiction


http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/22031/Amour-Louis-Tomlinson-Fanfiction/1/


Thanx,
Suman x
Suman98 Suman98 @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/30/13
Can you review mine? It's Called Secrets. Thanks !(:
One_Direction_Stole_My_Life One_Direction_Stole_My_Life @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/30/13
@Unique_11
Of course!! I can't even believe it!!! :)
It has really motivated me to keep writing more! :)
Thanks again!
Jen Storm Jen Storm @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/29/13
@Unique_11
It's okay
Kayla Styles Kayla Styles @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/29/13
@Fivesexof1D

your welcome :D
UniqueMOFO UniqueMOFO @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/29/13
thank you! <3
vogueharry vogueharry @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/29/13