Girl With The Sparrow Tattoo
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REVIEW:
Cover: 7.5
Originally: The prologue gave me a sense of horror and pain, but yet romantic in some way. And I liked that. It was really good, and I've honestly never read anything like this. :)
Paragraphs: Good. ((Just NEVER do ONE LONG PARAGRAPH for a chapter!! :)))
How I feel About the Idea:7
How You portray your characters: 8 very well!
Grammar, spelling, etc..: Very good!!
Some Tips from me ---> to you:
*Keep the details!! My love, that was amazing! It was so detailed and i honestly loved it! It started out mysterious, and I liked that a lot!!! Detail is one of the main keys for a good story, and you nailed it!!
*I honestly don't think I have any tips for you, besides just keep on rolling with it! Its a nice story, and I love it. I'm totally going to subscribe!! x
*Never rush things, everyone should know this!
*Be yourself when it comes to how you write.

PS: Out of the one's I've reviewed so far, yours is the only one I like! The one I done before this was horrible, and you made me feel better!!! xx ♥

Overall: ITS PURELY AMAZING. I LOVED IT AND ITS VERY GOOD!!

If I were to recommend your story:
I'd recommend it to EVERYONE!! Its amazing, and very very very detailed, which most people love!!

Good luck on your story, I hoped this help. Please remember to never take anything to heart. I'm not trying to be rude, mean, etc.. I'm just trying to help you out, besides you asked for it! :)

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