Fanfiction: Success & Failure
Story Review For This_crazy_girl
Mork Sanning
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REVIEW
Cover: 3
Originality: Its sorta unique/orignal, I've never read anything like it.
Paragraphs: 3 The chapters need to be a little more longer, Sorta add some more details into it.
How I feel About the Idea: 5-7
How You portray your characters: 5-6 Okay, they could be better.
Grammar, spelling, etc..: Very good, I didn't catch any mistakes
Some Tips from me ---> to you:
*More Detail ~ Details are what draws more readers in, so get a little more depth with the details.
*Longer Chapters ~ Some people actually want to read something that will lead them to wonder and anticipate the next chapter, so try to add more length to them.
*Never rush things, everyone should know this!
*Be yourself when it comes to how you write.
Overall: Its very different, just add a little more detail and longer chapter content.
If I were to recommend your story:
I would recommend your story to people I know like the idea and your style of writing.
Good luck on your story, I hoped this help. Please remember to never take anything to heart. I'm not trying to be rude, mean, etc.. I'm just trying to help you out, besides you asked for it! :)
Notes
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This is a great idea, bummed I have too many chapters for review ;(
10/28/15