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I Can't Hold Back - Comments, page 2
Im not even gonna lie. I seriously cried for five minutes when niall "died". Because just the thought of that makes my heart hurt. Its a great story but the ending made me sad :'(
Do me a favor and become an author. You are the first person to make me cry while reading a book. Thank you. I will forever enjoy what you write. And you did awesome with the pain part. Maybe a little too awesome. Again thank you.
You're an amazing writer....the first to also make me cry while reading a story on here...even though it's a sad ending it's still an amazing story. xo
I loved your story....this is the first ever story to get to me emotionally and actually make me cry..that's hard for an author to do but you managed it you're an amazing author and you should really think about writing professionally x
Who killed her? why did you make it seem like they were going to live happily ever after then kill him? why did you kill her is there going to be another story? What did the boys do when they found out? hows her mom? #q
Okay,
who killed her? What did the boys say when they found out she was shot? Why was she shot?
Sorry, I just have a lot of questions haha
who killed her? What did the boys say when they found out she was shot? Why was she shot?
Sorry, I just have a lot of questions haha
I just cried my eyes out, this is sooo emotional. Thank you for writing one of the best story I've read here x
Omg u....ugh I'm crying right now, why u have to go write a sad story and with a sad ending WTF was that!!!!!???? U made my day though : ) I'm sad that it ended and the WAY it ended!!! It meant ALOT that u said it was one of the hardest things u had to write, I'm not the only true directioner that would cry if one of the members died. (I go to a big school and theres only 5 people out of Idk ALOT of people that are true directioners that go to my school.other than that they all are haters!!)
8/29/13