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I think he should be like bipolar. Extremely agressive one day and extremely sweet others. I think u should make it to where summer starts to fall in love with sweet niall and slowly love agressive him. And yes more niall pov please!! Maybe even a lil harry or louis!!

mcalanna22 @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/29/13

Omfg... I think Niall is aggressive enough. I'm gonna cry if he gets anymore aggressive. I think Summer will never escape from Niall, even if she escapes the house. Niall'll chase her down. YES. OMFG YES PLEASE. WRITE MORE IN NIALL'S POV. :D

WontStopTill1DStops @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/28/13

Yeah, how about a sweet Niall chapter?

Rebecca @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/28/13

Niall needs to calm down a bit xxx

Boobear and Nialler's Bitch @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/28/13

I'm sorry if you do not understand what I wrote I'm from Israel and my English is not very good

Business Proposal @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
11/28/13

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Oh dear, I think she should run away and she will be pregnant go on as fast as you can I really really love your Tsifor I love the Keep as quickly as possible and do Nail pov

Business Proposal @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
11/28/13

I think that summer should exscape and take eli with her. Niall is being a douche

Lillian_Horen @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/28/13

Oh my god. Babe. I am so sorry you got kicked out. I hope you're alright! If you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm here almost everyday. I'm here for you. :) I just read this now, and I am hooked. I hope you can update soon, but absolutely NO PRESSURE! :)

WontStopTill1DStops @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/27/13

Its okai! I still love your stories!! I can not wait to read more!! Please updat as soon as it is possible for you!!

mcalanna22 @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/27/13

Awesome one!

Rebecca @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/26/13

Dude. I just started reading && I want more. Update!

MorganJ. @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
11/26/13

You never updated :(
i hope nothing wrong is going on?
are you ok? .... Of just need a break from this website?
Lol x

TommoTomlinson @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
11/15/13

For the love of Cheese update please

TommoTomlinson @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
11/11/13

awwwwwwwwww how cuteeee

ForeverElounor @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/7/13

Update please! I think she is having drunk feelings for him I don't know if it will last

Nialler52
11/4/13

For the love of god please update!! x

nathaliereyes @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/4/13

update update update UPDATE

Hannah Elizabeth @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/3/13

Please update

Awesome_girl_123 @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/30/13

Oh My God please update xxxx

Boobear and Nialler's Bitch @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/19/13

Loved the update!

Um, I think I would like to see the girls really talk about what's going on and how they are reacting to it really, like the pro's and the con's. Oh and also if Summer interacted with Harry and Louis in conversation more. Oh and maybe even a proposal, from like harry or louis yeahh ahah