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UPDATE PLEASE!

Plz update IM DIEING HERE

1.) A little bit meaner but not to much, I would love to see summer fall in love with him.
2.) No but possibly a phone call to her family?
3.) Yes ^_^

Please Update!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please Update!!!!!!!!!!!!

1. Yes I think Niall should be more aggressive.
2.If she did, I would not really enjoy the story anymore.
3. Yes but not too often.
Thank you! :)

1. YESSS, TOWARDS SUMMER MAYBE? 2. YESS

UPDATE ITS AMAZING PLEASE hahaha I love it! Really intriguing

Plz update soon. Loving this story

I said I love your dictates and I ask you to continue

1) i would like to see Niall more aggressive because it makes the story interesting because you see how he can go from hurt to angry to sorry to happy and its just really a good thing to see i like how Niall is aggressive if he wasn't as aggressive than she would walk all over him so yes make him more aggressive.

2) i think shell try but shell keep getting punished then eventually she does escape but only for a period of time but the boys find her and gives her a long punishment and are meaner than ever before so they give her a lifetime punishment

3) yes you should write in nialls point of view a little more like when he is sorry or right before during and after a punishment.

@Business Proposal
pardon me

You can proceed faster please i really love your Tsifor

Plz update This story is really good :)

BEAUTIFUL STORY BY THE WAY. KEEP UPDATING

okay you want what I think? 1)Niall should be a bit nicer.THEN Niall and Summer get together. BUT then something like maybe one night Niall gets drunk and brings another girl home and has sex with her right in front of Summer.THEN THEY BREAK UP. And that destroys Niall. maybe Summer gets closer to one of the other guys . and NIALL GOES BACK TO HIS WAYS.THEN RELISES WHAT HES DOING AND TRIES TO MAKE IT RIGHT(2) MAYBE the guy who Summer gets close to tries to help her leave. (3)YES MORE NIALLER POV .MAYBE EVEN A HARRY POV were he thinks maybe there are feelings for Summer. BUT REMINDER THIS IS YOUR STORY .FOLLOW WHAT YOUR HEART SAYS.

1. Niall should get more aggressive and then after words he feels bad and when he tries to fix it he always fucks it up.
2. No, Summer will never ever escape.
3. i like Niall's pov more then i like summers pov.

@Marygrace
well they arent celebrities in this story, their just 3 friends so there really isnt a "rest of the band". I might introduce them in future chapters if my readers would be interested in that. i write my chapters based of feedback and ideas i get in the comment section so if you ever have an idea leave it in a comment and ill try my best to include it in the story :)

Oh one question: where is the rest of the band?? Oh and yeah I think there should be more niall pov because well I wanna know what's on his mind yah know

I absolutely LUV this story i hope she falls for Niall