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Hard Fall

Chapter 3

Niall's p.o.v.
~ 3 days prior to the
My apartment building had been buzzing about new people coming to stay and live here, and I'm not gonna lie... I was excited.
When they arrived, I was surprised to see two young ladies about my age walk through the door. One had beautiful blonde hair, and the other had medium-length brown hair that was tied up in a pony tail. They both smiled as I walked past. The girl with the blonde hair had a wonderful smile that had suddenly given me chills. I must have been staring to long because the girl with the brown hair had approached me.

" Hi, I'm Emma " she said.

"Hey, you must be my new neighbor" I said nervously, hoping she didn't notice my creepy stare.

"Yep, and I see you were looking at my friend Savannah......She's single you know" Emma replied with a giggle in her voice.

"Here I'll take you to meet her" She said.

Wow, how could something like her be available. But, against my better judgement I followed her into the small, spacious apartment. As we walk in I notice tons of boxes and a few amazing guitars. One I recognize to be a replica of the guitar used by Ozzy Osbourne in one of his tours. I see she also has a couple boxes full of sports memorabilia. She was definitely my type of girl. She seemed to have noticed we were there, because she suddenly turned around, and stared at me in confusion and then back at Emma.

" Oh hi" she says still staring at me.

" Hi, it's nice to meet you" I say and she seems surprised at my accent, but I don't say anything and neither does she. She sticks out her hand to shake, but I grab it and kiss it. She also seems surprised by this. Instead she just smiles and gestures us towards the couch and I take her up on that offer.

I later tell her that my name was Niall, and I found out that her was Savannah. The name as beautiful as she. We mostly talk about me and my life. Though I left out the part about me being famous. She really didn't notice and I was astonished. I hadn't met one girl that hadn't recognized me let alone two. I told her about visiting all around the world and the different countries I had been to.

After the talking died down I eventually left. Savannah must've been thinking about something else because once I stopped talking she sort of left the conversation. I said my goodbyes to Emma and Savannah, though I don't think she heard me. I asked Emily if her and Savannah wanted to hang out tomorrow and she replied with a smile and said she would consult Savannah. I had given her my number and to my surprise she gave me her number and Savannah's 'just in case' was the way she had put it.

When I reached my apartment, I quickly changed out of my clothes and into my bed. Leaving no time to sit around. I had to learn more about Savannah. She seemed to have been very shy and scared though she didn't show it. Something about her intrigued me, I had never met a girl like her before ever in my life. She was smart, beautiful, and seemed to be very organized and together. I'll get her to like me, I know it...







Notes

Hey, I've noticed my chapter aren't very lengthy and I'm hoping that this chapter is maybe better than before. I'll definitely aim for longer in the future :)

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Comments

@Princesspeanut76
Thanks! It's so nice to hear from a viewer :)

Niallmylove66 Niallmylove66
11/6/16

@Niallmylove66
I love your story!!! It's so detailed!

Sorry about the texting it didn't show up he was supposed to ask hey it's Niall and if she wanted to come and she said that that was fine but Emma couldn't make it I didn't realize that had happened until now, sorry. I'll make it better next chapter!

Niallmylove66 Niallmylove66
8/22/16

Thank you to those of you who viewed and gave me a chance anything I can do to make it better?

Niallmylove66 Niallmylove66
8/19/16

Hi, I'm new but feel free to comment on my critique. Thank you!

Niallmylove66 Niallmylove66
8/18/16