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Also... my ideas are just suggestions.. do what makes you happy! :)

SO far so good...
I suggest you correct your grammar... like add commas and space out your writing so that.. the reader doesn't get intimidated by the big length paragraph. I like how you write with detail.. it helps visualize and there's no doubt you know how to write! Also.. add more dialogue... it will catch attention.. and don't be afraid to use pictures and stuff to make it more interesting... OVERALL... this story is kick-ass... love it! I think its quite interesting... keep going!

All the love <3

I didn't know that it was so short I did it on my phone my apo