New Girl
Chapter 10
Naomi p.o.v
"Hey, wanna be partners?" He asks.
"No, I got a partner," I answer.
"Where?" He asks.
"She went to the bathroom," I say.
"Now your making up imaginary people so we don't have to be partners?" He asks.
"'She' is not imaginary Niall. She's in front of yo face!" Perrie shouts walking up to us.
Niall groans and walks away.
"So, what should we do? Um, what about, a back flip, hand stand, and jump over your partner?" I ask.
"I don't know if you can do that, but I can't," she says.
"Try it! It's super easy!" I persuade her.
"You do it first," she says.
"Ok," I say.
I do exactly what I said: First, I do the back flip, and the hand stand.
"Lie on the floor Perrie" I demand.
"No! It's gross!" She whines.
"Do it," I tell her.
"Fine," she gives in. She lies down.
I walk backwards, and run towards her, full speed. I jump, high, flip over, and land on my feet.
I look up, and everyone is staring at me. Was it really that good?
"Oh my gosh," I hear.
"Wow"
"That, was AWESOME!" Someone shouts.
Niall is just staring at me. Creep.
Out of the blue, Niall yells, "I'm hungry!"
"What?" Mr. Frilly asks.
"Sorry Mr. Frilly," he apologies.
"I'll never get this kid," Mr. Frilly sighs.
I smile.
I look back over to where Niall was, and he's gone.
Notes
Filler. Sorry. It's late and my kindle is about to die :<|
Where did niall go?
No more. :P
Hey so here's my review for this one:
Could be a bit more descriptive , tends to be a bit to much talking and confusing on who is talking at the moment or who "she" is but I'm sure you are getting better as you go on. Other than all of that its a pretty good story line
6/18/14