New Girl
Chapter 9
Naomi p.o.v
My last class, P.E. I don't like this class because Niall and Miley are in it with me. I walk into the gym, and sit where the rest of the kids are.
"Ok everyone, we have a new student today," he starts. "And her name is…" he waits for me to answer.
"Naomi, Naomi Palmer," I say.
"We all know that!" Miley shouts.
"Well, Mrs. Johnson, I didn't know. Five laps around the gym. Now." He demands.
Miley gets up and starts running.
"Well, Naomi, I'm Mr. Frilly. Nice to meet you," he says.
"Nice to meet you too," I smile.
Someone runs in to the gym, and sits next to me.
"Mrs. Edwards, why are you late?" Mr. Frilly asked.
"Um, I had to use the bathroom," she answers.
"Thats exeptable," he says.
"It's pretty obvious she's lying!" Miley yells.
"Five more laps," he tells her simply.
She groans.
Mr. Frilly tells us what we are going to be doing, and we need partners. I don't anyone in this class except Niall, and I'm not partnering up with him for sure.
"Hey, wanna be partners?" Someone taps my shoulder. I turn around and see the girl that was late.
"Uh, sure, I'm Naomi, who the hell are you?" I smile. She laughs.
"Perrie, Perrie Edwards," she answers.
"Ok," I say.
"Hey, I gotta go to the bathroom, hold on," she says.
"You just went though?" It sounded more like a question.
"I drank coke," she says.
"Oh, ok." I laugh.
She asks Mr. Frilly and goes to the bathroom.
After, Niall walks over to me.
Notes
Cliffhanger? Idk.
No questions!
~Naomi
Hey so here's my review for this one:
Could be a bit more descriptive , tends to be a bit to much talking and confusing on who is talking at the moment or who "she" is but I'm sure you are getting better as you go on. Other than all of that its a pretty good story line
6/18/14