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Louis' Girl

Meltdown

I turned the handle quickly just wanting to get this over with. But honestly Iv'e never been so scared. I have no idea what's going to happen. And that is scary: the unknown. The girl who I don't even know the name to stayed behind me as I busted in. Right before I did I stuffed the gun in my waistline in my shorts behind me. But I'm ready to go for it.

Louis and Chris had no guns in their hands. I looked at the rest of them which was Liam, Zayn, Niall, and Harry fighting some others. Louis and Chris were yelling at each other. They didn't even recognize I opened the door. Louis had a busted lip and Chris' nose had to be broke.

Chris made a swift move and pinned Louis to the wall. And started punching him repeatedly. "I would stop!" I screamed while pulling out the gun. Everyone stopped fighting and stared at me with jaws dropped.

"Please princess you don't even know how to use a gun." Chris smirked walking closer to me. "I wouldn't try me." I growled. Louis started walking towards us to stop Chris but I shook my head no. I could handle this. But Louis was still ready to pounce if needed. Everyone one else was still watching wide eyed.

"I see you got Kayla." another guy who had dirty blonde hair said that wasn't far from me. Which I saw him before. He's the one who punched my jaw. I looked away to focus back on Chris who was closer. "Chris if you-" I began but he cut me off. "You don't even know how to use that." he spat moving closer.

I gripped the gun and pulled the trigger aiming at his leg. He fell to the ground instantly. The room began spinning. Everything is happening so fast. I just shot him. I actually pulled the damn trigger.

"Fuck you bitch!" he yelled while holding his leg which was pouring out blood. I looked at Louis who was dumbfounded including everybody else in the room. "I wouldn't be to quick to talk like that to the pissed off girl that so happens to have the only gun in the room." I said.

Louis started walking towards me but a scream caught my attention more. "Jessie!" Kayla screamed I spun around and the guy with dirty blonde hair had her by the waist. "Let her go!" I screamed. That's when Chris got within arms reach of me. He grabbed my ankle but I kicked his face. Then Louis hopped on him. I turned my gaze back to Kayla and the guy who was dragging her to the stairs. "No! Please help!" she said kicking and screaming. He punched her mouth leaving blood pouring down.

"Let her go!" I screamed running to them. He grabbed me then to. I fumbled with gun in my hand. I couldn't get it to face him. Did I mention he is a big muscular guy? I finally got the gun to where it was poking him in the stomach. As soon as I did he popped his eyes towards me. They were full of fear. I pulled the trigger. The gun jumped back and hit me in the ribs when it fired.

We all came crashing down. I was stuck underneath the lifeless guy. I struggled and used all the strength I had in me to push him off. But I didn't have it. I felt the warm liquid seep through my shirt onto my skin. I shuddered and suddenly felt nauseous. I began crying as realization hit me. I knew all along Iv'e been raped and beaten and now just killed a man. Then I began screaming. I couldn't stop. Then I felt the physical weight of the body get off me. But I still had the emotional, mental weight.

*Louis Pov*

She shot him. I can't believe she just shot Chris in the leg. My mouth hanged open and I could feel my eyes bulging out of my head. "Fuck you bitch!" he screamed in pain while gripping his wounded leg. "I wouldn't be to quick to talk like that to the pissed off girl that so happens to have the only gun in the room." she snapped.

"Jessie!" Kayla screamed. Jessie turned around fast to the girl being carried off by a large blonde man. "Let her go!" she yelled. Then Chris grabbed her ankle then in an instant she kicked him in the face then ran to go help Kayla.

I jumped on Chris having the advantage of his leg. That's when hell broke loose again. The fighting all started. Zayn, Niall, Liam, and Harry was handling three other guys. While I was handling Chris. And the girls fighting him. I hoped they could hang on for a minute.

I pounded Chris repeatedly. I grabbed his head and smashed it onto the concrete floor. He is either unconscious or dead. I looked at the the other guys. Zayn was helping Niall who was beaten pretty badly. Harry was finishing off another guy and Liam was helping him. Two guys from the other gang was laying on the floor.

Then I heard a shot. Right then Harry and Liam finished off the other guy. I snapped my head to Jessie's direction. She was under the man who had Kayla earlier. Kayla is trying helplessly to get him off but she can't. At the exact same time we all rushed over there. Since all the other guys were finished or unconscious.

Me and Liam pushed the man who I think was Michael off of her. She was shaking and crying so much. And she had blood curdling screams. Jessie was pulling at her hair. She was really messed up.

My eyes traveled to her shirt which was dripping with blood. I quickly ripped off her shirt preparing to see a gun wound. Not even half the blood that was on her was hers. I looked at Michael. He was shot in his stomach. I looked back at her. She had bruises everywhere. All you could mostly see was yellow, black, and purple beyond the red.

"Babe you're okay." I whispered pulling her up onto her knees in my embrace. "No I'm not!" she screamed while pounding on my chest. I grabbed her tiny bruised wrist and looked into her swollen teary blue eyes. "It's over." I said. "No." she said. She looked down at her other hand which I didn't have a hold on. She still had the gun. She was shaking so bad and started screaming when she started at it. Harry took the gun from her. Liam was holding Kayla while looking at Jessie with full of sympathy.

"We have to go." I said pulling her up into my arms. Her eyes scanned the room looking at motionless bodies sprawled on the ground. She started to hyperventilate. "Jess it's okay. It's over." I said carrying her to the stairs. Harry motioned his head towards the bodies. Zayn and Niall stayed with them. Probably to make sure Chris is dead and whoever else. Liam carried Kayla who was sobbing in his chest. I sighed and looked at Jessie who is now passed out in my arms.

Notes

I hope you like how it ended with Chris and them. I didn't know what was going to happen honestly. I had no plan. I just typed!(:
QUESTIONS:
What will happen to Jessie?
What will happen to Kayla?

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Comments

seriously not gonnna mae a sequel??

So ur not gonna make a sequel? :( that makes me sad.. that makes me so sad seeing that this is one of my most favorite fanfics EVURRRR

OMG sequel! You can't leave me hanging!!!!

I DEMAND A SEQUEL OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND SMOTHER YOU....in love of your fanfic of course cxx xoxo :*

I DEMAND A SEQUEL OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND SMOTHER YOU....in love of your fanfic of course cxx xoxo :*