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Sad, Beautiful, Tragic
9
First of all, the description, title, and summary immediately got me hooked. It didn't reveal everything, but just enough for the reader to get interested.
MINOR grammatical errors. I saw only one or two per chapter. Good job!
I didn't like how the character's profile was so long. All I did was skim it, so I don't know much about the characters.
Your writing is detailed, and it felt emotional, like you put your heart and soul in your writing.
The eh only thing you have to do is proofread more carefully and cut down on the character's profile and bam! 10 stars!
First of all, the description, title, and summary immediately got me hooked. It didn't reveal everything, but just enough for the reader to get interested.
MINOR grammatical errors. I saw only one or two per chapter. Good job!
I didn't like how the character's profile was so long. All I did was skim it, so I don't know much about the characters.
Your writing is detailed, and it felt emotional, like you put your heart and soul in your writing.
The eh only thing you have to do is proofread more carefully and cut down on the character's profile and bam! 10 stars!
Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !
7/4/14