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The Story Critic

The Fire in His Eyes

Rating: 9


BRILLIANT!!!!!

ALL I HAVE TO RREALLY SAY!



Just work on your grammar and punctuation a bit!

Notes

(Sorry this review SUCKED, but I am rushing right now n___n)

Comments

plz check out my story it's called "inspirational messages" and take your time I don't care when you review it as long as you do thanks so much

Corrina Alicia Bishop Corrina Alicia Bishop @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
3/10/15

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !

Perla1D Perla1D @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
7/4/14

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !

Perla1D Perla1D @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
7/4/14

Plz review my story! Its called it started on that farm thx!!

Savanna and Niall Savanna and Niall
5/23/14

please review my story: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/39122/Gone/
thanks x

ishipbullsh_t ishipbullsh_t @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
4/6/14
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