The Story Critic
Stupid for Letting You Go.
Rating: 9.5
I love this story and everything about it!
Positive Points:
-LOTS of drama! It keeps the readers, reading!
-Cliffhangers! The readers will really want to know what's coming next!
-Little punctuation mistakes.
-Well thought out and written!
Negitave Points:
-There were a few places where I found some letters that were supposed to be capitalized,
Not capitalized. Very few though. That's the only reason I gave you a 9.5.
Overall thoughts: Great! I will Definantly read this again!
I love this story and everything about it!
Positive Points:
-LOTS of drama! It keeps the readers, reading!
-Cliffhangers! The readers will really want to know what's coming next!
-Little punctuation mistakes.
-Well thought out and written!
Negitave Points:
-There were a few places where I found some letters that were supposed to be capitalized,
Not capitalized. Very few though. That's the only reason I gave you a 9.5.
Overall thoughts: Great! I will Definantly read this again!
plz check out my story it's called "inspirational messages" and take your time I don't care when you review it as long as you do thanks so much
3/10/15