Rating: 9 (you can make that 9.5 if you want, just for your pleasure :P)

My Thoughts: Wow. Just wow. You had me so into the story. I didn't stop 'til... well, I couldn't read the whole story (sorry!), but I kept going on and on until my laptop ran out of battery and I had to charge it! :P And I didn't continue reading your story, 'cuz I've got a lot of other stories to read and critique, but let me tell you... it was just amazing! I could barely find any mistakes! I had to literally go looking for errors :P

The Critic Says:
Positive Points:
- It is well written, nicely described, and keeps the readers hooked.
- The story has a nice length to it. Each paragraph is nice and long. The chapters aren't too long that they make you want to stop reading before you're even half way through it, and neither are the so short that they agitate you. It's just right.
- The description is good. No great! They are purely beautiful. It's great!
- The story has a great plot. I'm running out of words to describe your story. It's that good.
- The point of view change is also well paced out. You keep it one point of view per chapter. That's something I really appreciated. Many people change within a chapter. That is something that gets on my nerves. Your's is perfect.

Negative Points:
- At the beginning, the way the characters meet seems a bit... unrealistic. I mean, three girls who absolutely despise One Direction go to pick up a sister from their concert and realize she's already gone after they get there. Then they get lost in the parking lot and ask a Black SUV which somehow happens to be the all famous pop stars One Direction in plain sight for direction. Then, although they hate the boys, they end up inviting them over to their flat to hang out the same night and the boys agree to go to a random stranger's house. They didn't have any security, no body guards... nothing. A bit odd, don't you think? I know it's a story and you can't actually do anything now, but just felt like pointing it out. Some stories are MUCH worse than this, but your story is too perfect! This was like one of the only mistakes, so I had to let you know. Or I generally wouldn't mind.
- You tend to use capslock once in a while. Don't do that. Just add an exclamation point at the end of the sentence and it conveys that it has been exclaimed. :)
- When you insert links to the story, can you maybe try to insert it so that it opens in a new tab? It gets hard to continue reading, especially if you've got slow internet connection and you have to wait for the page to load while staring at a blank screen while you could continue reading instead if it were to open in a new tab.

Overall Thoughts:
There isn't much! That's all! It's a great story! Don't stop writing! Continue! Please! Your readers love you! <3

Guys go check out Unexpected Interests, by Corey: http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/18539/Unexpected-Interest/

Notes

Here's another critique for y'all! :)
*Read that in a southern accent :P