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Cute and Irish

Cute and Irish - I missed you

*The next day* "Eleanor, Wake up!!" Perrie screams. "What? What's happening?" Eleanor asked surprised. "The boys are coming today. remember?" I said. "Oh yeah. Sorry. I felt like sleeping in." She said. The doctor walked in and gave us our breakfast. Ohh hot soup and some orange juice! "I have to admit. I like hospital food." I said. We all laughed. "When your done you girls better rest. Are you expecting visitors?" The doctor asked. "Actually yes. The boys. Niall, Louis, Harry, Zayn and Liam." I said. "Okay. Well then you girls better rest after." The doctor said and left the room. "What do you think the boys got for us?" Perrie asked. "Probably something really cute." Eleanor said.

*Louis' POV* "Guys, I just got a call from SYCO. We can't go visit the girls because we have to finish recording our new single." I told the boys. "WHAT!! NO WE CAN"T!! I PROMISED HER!" Niall screamed then through himself on the couch and hid his face with a pillow. "Niall. Don't worry. We'll try again tomorrow." Harry said to Niall sitting down beside him. "But they were expecting us today. We can't let them down." Niall said. "We'll just call them. Don't worry lad." Zayn said dialing their number. We puts the phone on speaker. "Hello?" Eleanor says on the phone. "Hi baby. It's Louis here. We can't come today. We have to finish recording. Sorry babe." Louis said. "Oh its okay. Also, Is Niall there? Crystal wants to say hi." Eleanor said. "Of course." Louis said handing Niall the phone. "Hi Crystal. I'm sorry I can't make it today. we'll try again tomorrow." Niall said. "Oh. It's ok babe. I understand. See you tomorrow then." Crystal said hanging up. "Bye." Niall whispers to himself.

*The girls at the hospital.* "They're not coming to visit today." I said to Perrie. "Aww. But I wanted to see Zayn." all of the sudden Perrie's heart rate started to slow down. "Perrie? Are you okay?" Eleanor asked. "Everything is blurry now." She said and her heart rate started to slow down even more. "Doctor!!" Me and Eleanor screamed at the same time to make us louder. "Guys don't scream." The doctor said coming in. "What happened to Perrie?" He came up and checked her pulse "She's slowly dying. What happened? Did you get enough rest? I think she was kicked to hard. " The doctor said. A bunch of other doctors came in and took her bed to the emergency room and moved me and Eleanor closer. "We'll go call Perrie's Family and friends." The doctor said as he walked out the door. I took out my phone and called the boys. "Hello?" I heard Harry said. "Harry get Zayn on the phone now." I said to Harry. "Okay on second." Harry said giving "Hey Crystal. What's up?" Zayn asked me. "Perrie is slowly dying here. You have to come as soon as you can before it might be to late." I said. "WHAT! Ok thanks babe. I'll be there soon." Zayn said hanging up the phone.

About 15 minutes later the boys got to the hospital and ran to our room. "Crystal. Eleanor. Where's Perrie?" Zayn screamed asking us. "She's in the emergency room. Her heart rate slowed down for some reason." Eleanor said. "Hi baby. I missed you." I said to Niall as he walked up to my bed. He kissed my forehead and pulled up a chair beside me. "Hi babe. I missed you to." Niall said. "Are you gonna be okay?" He held my hand looking worried. "I'll be fine. as long as I know you love me." I said to Niall. "Baby, If you love something, let it go. If it comes back, then its yours." Niall started to cry a little. "I-I can't lose my princess." He got up. "I'll be in the washroom." Niall said walking off. Harry and Liam came up to me. "How's our beautiful babe?" Harry asked. "Not very good." I said. "It's gonna be fine." Liam said stroking me hair. Harry leaned in, kissed me forehead. "Get well soon." then walked away. "Hey Crystal." Louis said coming in. "Thanks for keeping Eleanor company." He said giving me a stuffed toy carrot. "Haha thanks." I said. He then walked up to Eleanor.
I sat in bed for a few minutes then my heart rate started to slow down. "Crystal!" Eleanor screamed. "NO! PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME!" She screamed. All the boys came up to me. Eleanor's bed was right beside me, so she grabbed my hand. "CRYSTAL! NOT YOU TO!!" She screamed. "I-It's blurry." I said. I got very dizzy. My heart rate slowed down even more. "I'll get Niall." Liam said running outside to door. "Crystal." Harry said grabbing my hand. Louis and Zayn ran out the door looking for a doctor. Zayn and Louis came back with a bunch of doctors. They took my bed and brought me to the emergency room. Where they tried to save me and bring my heart rate back up. This cannot be the end.

*Eleanor's POV;* "NOOO CRYSTAL!" I said as I saw her bed leave with a bunch of doctors. Louis came to me. "Eleanor. She'll be fine trust me." He said hugging me. I cried. "El. It'll be fine. Harry is crying to.They're all crying cause of Perrie and Crystal. But they'll be fine." Louis started to cry a bit. Liam and Niall both came into the room. "NO!!! CRYSTAL!" Niall said dropping to the ground. "This can't be." Niall said. He screamed. Niall was taking it the hardest. A doctor came in. "Hello boys." The doctor said. "How's Perrie? Will she make it?" Zayn asked. "Well. She might not make it. We've tried our best, but her heart rate just keeps slowing down." The doctor said. "So my girlfriend might die, and I didn't even say goodbye." Zayn said. He sat back down and cried. "Well. She's not gone yet." The doctor said. I can't believe it. I just cried.

Notes

It's long I know. Not finished yet. Feedback please

Comments

@Savanna and Niall
It was my first fanfic. I know it was bad.

BooBear2010 BooBear2010
7/29/14

I did not like this at all. It was WAYYYYYYYY to rushed. Honestly I would slow things down.

Perrie shouldn't have died.

I loved the story but you killed Perrie !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this plz update soon and don't let Perrier die plz :( x

Chloe mc Chloe mc
2/9/14