In The Heat of Los Angeles - Comments, page 4

I'm so sorry this took me so long to read, I love this story so much that I always make sure I set enough time to read it without disruptions lol. Also, I love how you incorporated her medical issues, and how you told us more about migraines in your author's notes. I never knew anyone that struggled with severe migrains so it's new to me and I can't imagine that pain. I hope you feel better and that the medical treatments expand for you too! Love this chapter so much. It just goes to show how strong thier relationship is growing in such a short amount of time.

@raybansncoffee
YAAAAYYY!

@xXFluffy_GruXx
Thanks! Today I'm finally starting to feel a little bit more like a person. I think it's time to get to work on chapter eighteen!

@raybansncoffee
That's definitely a good thing!! Hope you get to feeling better!

@xXFluffy_GruXx
It's definitely a weird way that migraines work through people. I'm sorry to hear that you have them. And I know how long the hours can feel. 15 days has felt more like 15 weeks. I'm about to take yet another round of all of my medication and hopefully pass out until morning when I need to get up for work. Luckily I work from home most days and the days I'm not at home I can work in sweatpants or pajamas and no one cares. So there's that. :)

I have migraines too, except I just get a little nauseous, dizzy, and usually sleep it off. I got one while I was working... the hours have never felt that long in my life. Lol.

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
I have some cousins that own an Italian restaurant. The chicken parm I imagine when I write is the recipe from the restaurant. It's the thing I'd eat if I was told it was my last meal. Best thing on the planet. If only I knew how to make it!

@raybansncoffee
Lol I want this chicken parm recipe for real now, and I definetly would fall in love with a boy who made me chicken parm. It's already one of my favorites!

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
You just totally made being up this late after a long day and facing another long day tomorrow WORTH IT!. I'm so glad that people are loving this chapter and responding to the characters and their moment. I'd been sneaky. I had this moment with the chicken parm planned since I wrote the first chicken parm scene. I mean if a boy made me chicken parm I'd tell him I loved him too. :)

Omg.... Why do I have tears! This was soooo good. I knew. OMG I knew, right when I read "Chicken parm." I was screaming in my head "THIS IS IT!" I knew he wanted to tell her sooo many times and I'm so happy he finally did and she did as well. Uh, my heart. This chapter made me so happy. It was amazing. Uh I just can't wait to see what's next.

@LivinLikeLarry
Thank you so much! It was a rough two weeks. :) And thank you...its been a rollercoaster of a year but worth every terrifying second of it.

Congrats & glad you are feeling better!!!

@xXFluffy_GruXx
I'm so glad you liked it! I've been planning that moment for a while and being able to pull it off was fun. I have a hard time picking between this and London Calling as well. I think I put so much time into LC that it's always going to have a special place for me but I really am enjoying this story and it's maybe taking the top spot...at least right now.

FREAK YES!! When I saw the chapter title, I flipped out. Your writing is absolutely wonderful and I got so excited when I saw that you had updated (even though I don't get notifications unless it's through my e-mail which is weird and I'm still trying to figure out how to fix that). I love this story so much that I honestly can't choose which one I like better... London Calling or this one. DX

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
You totally just made my day!!! Your review made my heart grow five sizes. And right now I'm in a serious state of exhaustion (antibiotics are supposed to make you better not kill you) so it was greatly appreciated. I'm glad you picked up on the hesitation from Harry. I'm excited to get going on the next chapter but also think I need a nap first. Thank you for making my day!

Harry: "I...I...I care about you a lot" HE WAS GOING TO SAY IT. OMG HE LOVES HER. I KNOW HE DOES.
*continues reading*
Harry: "Want to go for a walk?" OMG. Is this the moment???
*continues reading*
UHHH HE ALMOST SAID IT AGAIN. It's close. I know it. I feel it in my bones! This story.... is amazing. It makes me so happy, and I truly hope Harry finds someone like this in his real like. Someone who makes him this happy. They are perfect and I wish James could see that. I hope the dinner goes well, but i have a feeling something is going to happen... oh how I wonder what's stirring in that Brain of yours? ;) i hope your week is going good! Can't wait for the next chapter. Xx

@xXFluffy_GruXx
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Aw, babes. :')

@LivinLikeLarry
I'm glad someone picked up on Joe and Eliza. I hadn't originally planned it but when I was writing one night I was like "ya know what that's gonna happen!"

DUUUUUDE I JNEW SOMETHING WAS GOING ON BETWEEN ELIZA AND JOE!!!!