Cambridge (Part III) - Comments

Skylar offering to talk to Harry on Rachel’s behalf is adorable! It’ll give her the perfect excuse to get to spend time with Harry alone and she’s br helping out her friend! It’s a win win!
Rachel better not say yes to Ashton! Louis would be so heartbroken! Although maybe the jealousy would be enough to get him to do something about it and they’d finally get together! Can’t wait to see how it all plays out anyways!

Rachel and Louis are so right for each other and if they dont get together soon I'm gonna scream. He's so in love with her its adorable, shes so clearly jealous over Delia, I'd love to see her and Harry have a conversation about the whole situation, maybe even when she's been drinking or something, and she could admit how she feels about Louis to him.
He's being so supportive lately, I'm loving it

gAAAHHH

I'm loving this. So much. Skylar and Luke are finally calling it quits, which NEEDED to happen I mena because Harry's obviously so much better for her.

And is it weird that I'm really liking Delia at the moment. I know she originally wanted Rachel to date Louis because shes into Ashton, but shes being such a good wingwoman, Rachel is clearly jealous and hopefully now she'll finally admit she's into Louis and they'll get back together. Theyre so perfect!!

I'd love to see them share a dance at the ball!!

Soooooo good!

I am soooo a Rachel and Louis Shipper! I love them because they are imperfectly perfect. Like, one of those long going romances that are never the right time or right place... like the movie Love, Rosie, you know? If you haven’t seen it, it is sooo good. I highly recommend it. Anyway, yeah, Louis screwed up... and so did Rachel... and watching them slowly build back up is just... awwwwweeeeee!!!! Skylar and Harry are kinda the same way... although, if you could, maybe touch more into Luke’s mind... maybe a point of view from him... when the whole gang is together... or what if he finally called the two out in front of the whole group? There is no way that he hasn’t noticed or isn’t tired of their chemistry yet.

@Couchpotato
Ahh, a new reader! Welcome! So glad to see that you enjoyed the first two books and I hope you’re enjoying this one now. So you’re a Rachel/Louis shipper? Why do you like them together? Do you prefer them over Rachel and Ashton, or Skylar/Harry?

Thanks so so much for your wonderful comment!

@LizzyM101
So glad to hear you enjoyed the dream chapter! The next will be a bit longer and will be published in the next few days. Thank you so much for your comment and your continued support on this story!

So, I stumbled upon the first of these series last night.... and am completely caught up. So, question time. When is Louis, who is who I assume sent them, gonna tell Rachel about the Valentine’s Day flowers? Louis and Rachel are sooooo perfect... and the dream thing was soooo good! Please update and finish the story now

Interesting turn by having Rachel feelings for Louis turn up in a dream. Using Freud's iceberg theory of the unconscious i like it. But whether she will act on thoses feelings that will be the question.

1. Rachel and Louis
2. Rachel and Ashton
3. Ashton and Delia

1. Rachel and Louis
2. Skylar and Harry
3. Lizzie and Michael

1. Rachel and Louis
2. Skylar and Harry
3. Lizzie and Michael

@RosewaterLily
Thanks so much for your comment darling :) <3

Don’t stop writing this story, I love reading it! I want Skylar and Harry to end up together so bad and there’s no way Louis and Rachel can just leave things like that! They’re so in love with each other, I neeed then to end up together

@Mashton_Styles
I'm okay with Rachel and Ashton being friends just friends though.

@Prinny1321
Thank you so much for your comment! Love to see that you’re enhoying the story!

@LizzyM101
Thank you so much for your comment! We’ll definitely take your opinion into consideration. I’m so happy to hear that you’re enjoying the story! Rachel seems to be a reader-favourite character, especially when with Louis, glad to see you would like them together! What do you think of Rachel and Ashton possibly making up?

PLEASE DONT STOP THIS STORY I LOVE IY

Hi I love reading this story and I'm somewhat in the middle. I want Rachel and Louis to finally explore there feelings for each other because in the first story it was going strong and dropped rather drasticly. I would like them to have their relationship built properly. I'm not a big Skylar or Maggie fan so I can't speak for their storylines. But if you have to end it at least give Rachel and Louis a happy ending please.

Gahhh I love love love that Louis is finally admitting how in love with Rachel he is! I just hope Delia and him don’t make a scene given that Rachel and Ashton aren’t hanging out together. I’d like to see Rachel and Ashton becoming friends again.