Hooch [a n.j.h. fanfiction] - Comments

@jordyhoran


No problem! Glad to hear you're still trying to write it! I feared this was going to be added to my long list of 'lost inspiration' pile. Glad to hear it's not the case. :)

Take as long as you need sweetheart. <3

@Carol Clifford
I've just been so busy with school and soccer. I'm in the process of writing the next chapter. Sorry for the delay.

What happened to your story? There's no more updates! :(

Interesting new update love!

There's a lot of Niall's back story in this. Maybe a bit too much? I think it would've done you better if you had spread it out during multiple chapters. Then it's as if we're learning about him at a nice pace. Rather than having it handed to us in one sitting.

It could just be me though! If you're happy with how it's turned out and feel this is how it has to be, that it suits the plot better, then please disregard this. :-)

It's no wonder Niall drinks like he does. It'd be hard to stomach life after what he's gone through. Although I wonder if your MFC has something to do with what his parents were hiding. It'd make a nice plot twist that's for sure. ;)

Also though I should mention you have some flubs in this one. Like unneeded letters on words or missing letters. It happens when you're running out of time and are hastily trying to get everything out. (I know from experience.) A quick reread would fix it. :-)

@jordyhoran


No problem sweetheart! :-)
Hope you don't keep us waiting too much longer!

@Carol Clifford
thank you :) means a lot

This is really good. I'm not in the 1D fandom but out of all of them my fav has to be Niall.

I thank you for proofreading! It's so annoying to have to read through a story and find out that it's filled with misspellings.

Your characters are so broken and I love reading how they go through their struggles. I can't wait till they finally meet at one of their meetings. Maybe if they have someone to go through the shit with, things will start to become bearable.

Ok I'm loving it so far please update more often tho