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Hooch [a n.j.h. fanfiction]

Summary

Niall Horan and Ryan Windsor are both destructive young adults who have been through too much. Ryan has been in the shadow of her perfect older sister all her life and yearned for the attention of someone else. She surrounded herself with others who didn't care so she wouldn't be lonely, but it just made her realize that no one really liked her. The death of Niall's mother is what caused his downward spiral. He got mixed up in the wrong crowd trying to drown the sadness that was caused by his mother's death. Both individuals are addicted to the same substance that temporarily fills some of the void in their desolate hearts. Alcohol. But the important people in their lives are tired of it and send them to get help. The two lethal individuals met at AA and were intrigued by the similarities in their lives. Soon, they figure out that they crave each other to completely fill the void in their hearts. Well, that and the hooch.




Characters

Niall

Niall

Ryan Windsor

Ryan Windsor

(imagine her however you'd like)

Chapters

  1. 01

    "This is not the smart, caring girl she remembers. This girl is selfish, and destructive."

  2. 02

    "'I've put you through this for long enough. I'm going to change for you, Dad.'"

  3. 03

    "The downward cycle had already begun long before that moment."

  4. 04

    "Niall was broken glass lying on the floor that someone had carelessly knocked over, and the alcohol was the glue that held him together."

  5. 05

    "She put some of the money up for bills, and all the rest went towards the only thing in life she loves. The only thing that makes her feel alive. She drove back to her apartment and laid on the couch drinking away her worries and insecurities."

Comments

@jordyhoran


No problem! Glad to hear you're still trying to write it! I feared this was going to be added to my long list of 'lost inspiration' pile. Glad to hear it's not the case. :)

Take as long as you need sweetheart. <3

@Carol Clifford
I've just been so busy with school and soccer. I'm in the process of writing the next chapter. Sorry for the delay.

What happened to your story? There's no more updates! :(

Interesting new update love!

There's a lot of Niall's back story in this. Maybe a bit too much? I think it would've done you better if you had spread it out during multiple chapters. Then it's as if we're learning about him at a nice pace. Rather than having it handed to us in one sitting.

It could just be me though! If you're happy with how it's turned out and feel this is how it has to be, that it suits the plot better, then please disregard this. :-)

It's no wonder Niall drinks like he does. It'd be hard to stomach life after what he's gone through. Although I wonder if your MFC has something to do with what his parents were hiding. It'd make a nice plot twist that's for sure. ;)

Also though I should mention you have some flubs in this one. Like unneeded letters on words or missing letters. It happens when you're running out of time and are hastily trying to get everything out. (I know from experience.) A quick reread would fix it. :-)

@jordyhoran


No problem sweetheart! :-)
Hope you don't keep us waiting too much longer!