Persecute - Comments, page 4

@Ciao Niccie
Omg- you just made my day:')

Thank you so much, that is so sweet

I was intrigued to read your story after a recent review, from story recommendations. And I take under consideration that there are many young writers, so it's best to give words of encouragement so that they may continue growing in their skill but I must say I was impressed by your first chapter alone. After reading your bio and then the beginning of this story, I noticed the connection and it felt genuine.

I have a slight pet peeve, and I know a lot of stories here start that way, I apologize if you have one that does too, but I'm tired of reading about the girl waking up in the morning because her annoying alarm went off and there's two more paragraphs describing useless details that don't capture my attention at all. Needless to say you didn't do that. You took me right to the heart of the problem and I felt for the girl. Good work, I'm looking forward to reading more as this isn't typically a story I would follow, but I'm hooked. :)

@iloveharrystyles12
Thank you for the support:)xxx

Love it

@BloojayLove
:)

@AbyKay562
Awww no problem!!! P.S. That was the fastest response I have ever gotten!! Lolol

@BloojayLove
Awe- thank you. Jules and I honestly couldn't appreciate the feedback from you enough! :)xxx

Arghhhhhhhhhhh I LOVE IT

@iloveharrystyles12
thank you! Jules (The better and amazayn- lol) author will update next;)

Amazing chapter cant wait for the next update keep up the great work

Amazing chapter cant wait for the next update keep up the great work

@Little.things
Thank you so much! I love the feedback:)xxx

@BloojayLove , Thanks to you... I found this story, and I love it! Keep up the great work all of you! :D @Jules . Tomlinson and @AbyKay562

@BloojayLove

Thank you so much!! It means so much to both of us

@BloojayLove
Holy shit- thank you so much!

@AbyKay562
@Jules . Tomlinson

Gotcha guys!!! You were one of my daily highlights!! ;) Keep it UP!!!

@AbyKay562

Because all of us are queens. BAM

@Jules . Tomlinson
Because you are queen.

ALL HAIL

@Jules . Tomlinson
Because you are queen.

ALL HAIL

@AbyKay562

Ugh you act like I'm a queen and you're a peasant. YOU ARE QUEEN ABY STAHP