He Tells A Story - Comments, page 3

This story just got so good. I HATE that this story is on hold. how do i vote?

I've been reading the story like a ghost reader, and you go and put it on hold, I've created an account and Evs just to vote because this story is so good I don't even usually read Niall fanfics but yeah main point how the frig do I vote? X

@Telichia :3
AHHHHHHHHHH now i want people to vote now even more I NEED TO KNOW

@anonymouslyrics1305
Your comment just made my night :') I actually laughed out loud at that, it was super cute. I might update tomorrow, JUST FOR YOU <3 Thanks for the smile!

@Telichia :3

SAY WHAT!!! :O not little Yaden!!! OH RAINBOW SKITTLES!!!! what's going to happen?!

oh for love of Niall look what a great story like this does to ya...

Oh my gosh, nooo! What's wrong with my baby? That actually broke my heart. Please Lord Jesus let him be okay! He's so young! That's definitely not normal. Way to go Niall for stepping up to the plate!

@Mrs. Michael Hood
Thank you, please do <3 xx Something to think about before I update again : "Will the death of someone both Mist and Niall love bring them together or be the reason for them to drift away further?"

@anonymouslyrics1305
Thank you <3 I'll leave everyone with this thought: "Will the death of someone both Mist and Niall love bring them together or be the reason for them to drift away further?"

@CarterMarie
The chapter was super emotional for me lol </3 I'm leaving my readers with this thought : "Will the death of someone both Mist and Niall loves bring them together or be the reason for them to drift away further?"

you're gonna put this story on hold when you just wrote this chapter that got me in the feels? :'( okay i will tell my twitter followers to vote on your story. I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!

UGH! COME ON PEOPLE! PLEASE VOTE!

this is such a phenominiall story and I and a heap more people don't want it on hold! PLEASE!

there are stars up there ^ hold them ALL!!!

WHAT I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO YADEN

PEOPLE VOTE NOW!!!!!*%#*&!%*@!

Tf?! Don't like Josh anymore. What a douche bag! Forget Josh, forget Niall, I'm team Yaden lol. Yaden and Mist forever!

@Mimi_Bell
There's a reason for everything in the story. Thanks for your comments <3

@Mrs. Pan
Thanks <3

I think they're going to do what they used to do together. They're going to get drunk and get all hot and bothered lol. Things will escalate very quickly. They might go back to his hotel room. Mist will want it just as much Niall, realizing she still has feelings for him blah blah blah, but before they go too far, Mist will say she can't cause she's thinking of how she needs to protect herself and Yaden from getting hurt. She's going to apologize and go back to her hotel room, leaving Niall in his sad and lonely with his feelings hurt. More or less. This is strictly my opinion and how I can imagine it happening.

Omg, great chapter. I don't like how Yaden is calling Josh 'Daddy' and that Mist isn't correcting him. She should have Yaden call both of them by their first names. If Niall proves himself then Mist should let Yaden call him 'Dad'. Don't get me wrong though. I'm still team Josh! :)

I love this chapter thank you for updating. You're an awesome writer

@Beths_a_bae

@breadboy101

You girls are the reason why I keep writing this story! Your comments mean the world to me!

@Telichia :3
I get that Josh is kinda sorta dating Mist, but Yaden calling Josh daddy is taking it way to far!!!
Yaden needs to be calling Niall daddy,
Im really happy the three of them are spending time together:)
clearly im Team Niall all the way!!!
anyways great update, bye xx