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@Smile_survive44



@breadboy101


Hey! Okay so Louis hasnt been in the story much only because I felt the readers knew a bit about Louis&Rachel and i just wanted them to see a bit of Ashton&Rachel :)) i really appreciate you guys taking the time to comment :D Means a lot. Honestly im still unsure if its gonna end with Ashton or Louis as of yet, but thanks for your input :) ill take everything into consideration :) xx

@breadboy101
Totally on your side

Team Tomlinson!!!!
when is louis going to be part of the story again, these last few chapters have been all about ashton- who is dreamy, but nothing in comparsion to Louis

Team Irwin #rashton

Team Irwin #rashton

@BabyThunderDome
But is Ashton in the characters list , so yeah :|
i think Rachel should be with louis because they had a back story in the beginning of the story and something like that can't be forgotten . And let's not forget what happen to Rachel when she was drunk, louis saved her from making a bad decision and she even said it her self in chapter 8. So yeah …

@Smile_survive44
Hey! Okay I'm totally team Irwin all the way but I do see where your coming from.
However, you kind of have to realise that in the first say 40 xhapters we got to know Louis. And now we're seeing a bit more of Ashton. But genuinely before then it was Louis we heard all about.
Oh and this story is also on 5sosfanfiction.org so yeah..

Sorry I'm a louis girl and in the story louis really hasn't had the chance to hang out with Rachel so of course people or going to choose Aston over louis just because we as the readers have got the opportunity to know Ashton better than louis. So there is already a biased against louis
After all the web site is called One direction fanfittion but whatever decision you make will be respected.

Oh my god! That new chapter was fantastic ;D :)) God Ashton's so cute :') I just wanna hug him :p <3

Love thus story! ;D

Oh my god Team Irwin! Rachel and Ashton are perfect! :')

@BabyThunderDome
Aww, thank you! :)
haha, yesh :3

Oh my gosh! That chapter was perfect! Rachel&Ashton :')

@HeyItsGabi

Ohhh, right, thanks! :)

I thought it was Rouis

@BabyThunderDome

Me too! I'm writing it now :)

@Liam's Polka Dot

I think she should pick Ashton, he seems to care more for Rachel in my opinion :)

@Nadine17

Haha, wow! :D

@BabyThunderDome

I'll be sure to add both of those ideas in my chapter! :)


@HeyItsGabi

What's Rachel and Louis' ship name??

@Smile_survive44

Aww :)
Team Irwin- 4 Team Louis- 6
I'm not sure if the voting's are right, so if you all could vote the team again, that would help allot! Thanks!

@Smile_survive44

Louis please he so cute and funny and caring <3