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@styles 4ever
ur wlcm and my b-day is today!!! and did i sound like a pro back there cuz if so I make mistakes to i mean nobodys perf rite??
ur wlcm and my b-day is today!!! and did i sound like a pro back there cuz if so I make mistakes to i mean nobodys perf rite??
No offence but this story is very confusing, you don't have alot of details, your rating is a 2.0, your chapters are short, and I don't understand it. I'm not trynna be mean but I personally don't like this story. Maybe if you got an editor or something, or co-author than yeah. But if this is your first fanfic you need alot of work. If this is your first fanfic than I love the idea but I don't like the story itself. You should make the chapters longer and add more detail, and stop switching POV's so much, since the chapters are short anyways you should stick to 1 POV at a time. Just some helpful advice :) you don't have to listen if you don't wanna but i'm jus sayin......
@styles 4ever
oh cool:) i think ur doing a woderful job so far though! u should keep doin it love:) xx
oh cool:) i think ur doing a woderful job so far though! u should keep doin it love:) xx
no one said anything, so i have to continue on intill someone does or atleast co write with me!
@Lovelylogann
@Lovelylogann
ya i agree that this story is like 17 again:) i love that movie! i also think the first part reminded me kinda like the movie 13 going on 30:) u said u were giving the story to someone, yeah? like a contest or something? have u done that already??
happy late birthday
5/29/13