I really really like the idea of this story and I actually really like everything about it except u should really use quotation marks. Such as "Abby." I stuttered out. Or "Just breath baby." An Irish accent rings in my ears. It just gets kinda confusing without them. <3
I really really like the idea of this story and I actually really like everything about it except u should really use quotation marks. Such as "Abby." I stuttered out. Or "Just breath baby." An Irish accent rings in my ears. It just gets kinda confusing without them. <3
6/15/14