Secrets With My Step Brother**UNDER EXTREME EDITING!** - Comments

Whoa :( )

@Amoh1905

its okay, i guess....

@briannalovesniall
Well I'm sorry if I offended you but, anyway I really didn't care if your chapters were short. What mattered was that it was a really really really magnificent story. Sorry for any misconceptions.

loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was amazing:)

@niallers_date11

yeah i know its messed up. Just go to the sequel to it

I can't see what they look like waaa

@Amoh1905

i made a mistake on the POV part, yeah i know. And i don't have time to do long chapters all the time. So just let me be me and do what i do, and you can do whatever the hell it is you do. Kk?

Did you even spell check your story

Who's Rosie?

Why are your chapters sooooooo damn short?

Can you please put it on this website

@Sara-Louise

lol yea i understand what your saying..:)

Sequel I want to know if Harry and Katie stay together!! Your such a good writier

Omg I love this. I think you should do a sequel or another chapter that's one of those '5 years later' things or something. Does that even make sense?

Omg I love this. I think you should do a sequel or another chapter that's one of those '5 years later' things or something. Does that even make sense?

yes please please do a sequel !!

I don't think it should e the last chapter you left us with 'I won't waste her life away'.

How does Katie feel about Darcy? Do Harry and Katie ever get married or something?

I feel like this left us with a imaginary ending, having to improvise for the one you didn't give us.

@Elsa Love's One Direction

yeah and it should also include more gossip about Harry and Katie's romance if they ever get together lol

Please write a sequel!!! It should be about Darcy growing up.

@Morganhood12

thanks!