Dreams vs. Reality - Comments, page 2

@sunshine princess

I'm happy to help :) xxx You are going to do just fine!

@JustKeepSmiling
OH MY GOSH!thank youuuuu.I really appreciate your kindness,thank you so fucking much.and thank you so much for your advise you have no idea how much it means to me.and you definitley are right,I did see many mistakes when I reread it myself.thank you so much for the vote and sub too!it means the world to me as you know how does it feel to get your first votes :)))) and I'm so happy you cared so much to respond a fair length,it shows your care and I really appreciate that.love you so much! xoxo

@sunshine princess
Aww, thank you for your kind words! :) I did use my morning to read your story, and let me tell you that it is a great story, especially for a first! You are doing a great job. :D When I first starting writing, it was not like how you are currently reading, it was full of too many spacings and grammatical errors. My advice is to just be sure that when a new person talks you start them on a new line, (You definitely fixed that in your second chapter, which is great! :) ) and just small grammar errors, like punctuation and capitalization on names. I always review my chapters before I post, and even when I do post I still find and fix any errors on them. I still go back and re-edit previous chapters, even to my story that has been completed for months. Keep it up and I will be subscribing and voting, just so you know ;) much love!! xxx (Sorry for the long response, I'm not really one to be reviewing other people's stories! :P )

hiii...your story is amaziiiing.you're such a talented writer!I love your story also the cover!I found your story at perla's page actually.will you do me a favor and check my story?It's my first and I really need some advise.I wouldn't ask any writer but I really like your writing style so if you could do it...it would be great.lots of love...and..your story is AMAZIIIING :)))

@emmymemmy
That moment when you read through your own story, and realize that you skipped a chapter... Lol. Thank you :)

Plz update!! So good!

@kayla_hi

Awe thank you hun :) that means alot to me ^-^

This is soo AMAZING and PERFECT
you are such a talented writer
love it Xx

I hope you guys are still enjoying the story so far <3

That.Was.......AMAZING! Just one thing. Update!

Yay!

@Savanna horan
@AlyStyles

Chapter 11 is up guys :)

@AshleyRodriguez726
Yep! :Dxx

:0 oh no! What happened I must know!!!!!

@AlyStyles

I was thinking of doing another chapter on Friday, is that okay?

Ohmygosh, please update! The ending is just- amazeballs!xx

@Savanna horan

Lol. I am still sorry about this though. I'm going on a field trip on Friday to go see a play from Shakespeare, so I should be free that day :D I will do my best to get the chapter up! I am in the process of re-writing the chapter as we speak!

hahahaha when I first read the first sentence I was like,"waiiittttt didn't I already read dis?" I anit mad I just better get a chapter before Friday!

Yeah... Im writing everything on Word, and I just deleted the chapter i was going to post on accident... Just... Great... I am not the best with this lol. Please be patient with me and sorry for alerting you guys with a chapter..

I will try to re-write the chapter and have it up soon... Hopefully no later than tomorrow.

Love you guys. Please don't me mad! :(

@Savanna horan

Oh geez... Ackward... Lol.