Notorious - Comments, page 4

@ScarletCanBurn
Wow, you criticise his story and I can barely read your story because of all the mistakes? At least his one is readable and funny. Your story needs more paragraphs than his does. You're the childish one for down voting a perfectly fine story and then criticising his story when yours is much worse and needs more editing than his ever will.

@ID Equals A Dose of Herpes
That's cool.

@ScarletCanBurn
Um, my story just started. How can it be more popular? Just because something is popular doesn't mean it's good. Only morons use that logic. Also, you actually need more paragraphs than I do! You have tonnes of unnecessary capitalisation that needs to be fixed too. And you made grammatical errors in your reply to me. Congratulations, you're even more retarded!

@Lacey 1.87 @ID Equals A Dose of Herpes

okay here's the thing, I honestly don't give a fuck anymore, don't like my story or how it's written? Cool. Please feel free to write an entire Novel dedicated to how awful you think it is because I just don't care, and I will gladly go on not caring because my story is still more popular than anything either of you have written on this site. I'm not here to write something that I want published, I write because I find it fun, it calms me and helps with my illness. I would of gladly accepted the original criticism if it wasn't written in such a childish manner and intended as an insult. I'm done.

@ScarletCanBurn
You're really dumb, aren't you? He's correct in his criticisms and his grammar and punctuation in his story is much superior to yours. You did down vote his story, as I read it and it deserves a lot more. It's funny and well-written, and I grew up in the house of a freelance writer, so I should know.

@ScarletCanBurn
HAAHAHHAHAHAHA!!
How am I a hypocrite? Point out to me where my grammar is bad! You did down vote my story because I criticised yours. My writing is not horrible, I'm actually a popular author on another Mibba mini site, and one girl told me that my stories were "amazingly well-written". And that's the truth, and her story was one of the most popular on the site. I didn't touch the rating on your story, so it just shows how petty you are, and now you want me to go because you know I'm right.

@ID Equals A Dose of Herpes
I'm not even a directioner, I just wanted to write! And as I said, I'm from the North, that's how I speak. I didn't even down vote your story, I gave it what I believed it deserved and I've already said I think it's funny. You are clearly the hypocrite because you made a comment about my grammar when yours is no better. Can you go find an argument somewhere else because you are boring and very repetitive?

@ScarletCanBurn
I find it hilarious that you immediately go onto my story and pick out non-existent flaws. It only makes you "Directioners" look bad. And no, I'm not bothered by your opinion because I know you're wrong ;) You're just mad because I reviewed your story. How old are you, eleven? By your grammar, I guess so! Haha, anyways, I bet you're just mad I made Harry gay ;D I also recommend fixing your abomination of a story before you criticise anyone else's. I mean, I insulted your grammar and then you make a grammatical mistake in your reply to me and then proceed to down vote my story? That makes you hypocritical, spiteful and moronic, but what do you expect from someone who likes One Direction? Let's not forget "was took in by Liam"! HAHAHAHA.

@ScarletCanBurn
Okay!Thank you so much!

@Swiftioner136
I'll read it first thing in the morning and message you feedback :) because it's currently 3am I should probably sleep xx

@ScarletCanBurn
I updated with the first chapter.Please read it:)

@ScarletCanBurn
Thanks!And could you read my story when I post the first chapter?If you have a kik you can give me some tips and ideas.I know your busy with your story so when you have time.I promise I'll give you credit.I'll tell you when I post the first chapter.Thanks again!

@Swiftioner136
You don't sound stupid at all love! Below the comments there should be some stars :)

@ScarletCanBurn
I sound really stupid right now but how do you vote?

@ID Equals A dose of Herpes
If you aren't bothered about my opinion why are you explaining yourself to me? Silly and pointless

@ID Equals A dose of Herpes
If you aren't bothered about my opinion why are you explaining yourself to me? Silly and pointless

@ScarletCanBurn
And I used an overextending ellipses once. Yeah, that's really a lot.

@ID Equals A dose of Herpes
I don't think 4 stars is a down vote, I think it was quiet generous! I am aware you are taking the piss, hence why I found it hilarious.

@ScarletCanBurn
The lack of paragraphs is because no time passed. Paragraphs are used to show a passage of time. Read a damn book. In George R R Martin's A Game of Thrones paragraphs are only used to show a passage of time.

@ScarletCanBurn
And you don't know basic punctuation. Don't really see how you can judge my writing, haha! Thanks for the down vote, I'm basically taking the piss so all down votes and negative comments are appreciated ;D