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I started a fanfiction with my friend and we would definitely love it if you pointed us to what we need to correct as we progress into our story!

Irish_Snowflakes @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/7/14

@RejectCasualty
complete!

Irish Gal @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/7/14

I only have two - Until Next Time and Timing is Everything
Thanks

softballchick79 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/7/14

@softballchick79
nope! just let me know the two you'd like!

Irish Gal @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/7/14

Would like a review also. I have two, do I need to pick one?

softballchick79 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/7/14

@not_any_maryjane
Thank you! :)

xRockMex @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/7/14

@xRockMex
I was already subscribed anyway but I'll reread it :)

not_any_maryjane @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/6/14

@Irish Gal
Thank you so much for answering. I've changed the scene quite a bit and tried to make it not do dramatic and shortened it a little. I hope it's better. If you get a spare minute, let me know what you think. Thank you again!' :)

xRockMex @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/6/14

I'm so glad you are back! Could you please review my story 'Bizarre Love Triangle'? Not the other. I'd love to have your opinion. Thank you! :)

not_any_maryjane @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/6/14

@Missesonedirection94
Yes of course!

Irish Gal @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/6/14

@Irish Gal

Thank you SO much! I will def work on that! Maybe I'll ask for another review in the future? And again thank you for not only pointing out the bad. I appreciate that!

Missesonedirection94 @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/6/14

@Missesonedirection94
finished!

Irish Gal @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/6/14

Wow you've done so many reviews..can you review my story Picture Perfect? :) and Like The Shoe Lace?

kkgal14 @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/6/14

@xRockMex
No, you should keep that. I think the main thing to focus on would be the fight. When he comes home and is talking to his mom that all makes sense to me; just work on the fight scene. I'd either add more detail to it so I can picture it more or change up the dialogue. It's all very dramatic.

Irish Gal @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/6/14

@Irish Gal
Thank you for your review! I agree with the first chapter, I wasn't too sure on it. Do you think the part where he goes home after the fight I should change? Or just try and add more detail and getting more description of Harry? Sorry for the questions!!

xRockMex @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
10/6/14

@xRockMex
reviewed :)

Irish Gal @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
10/6/14

Do you think you could please rate mine? :) If it's no problem, of course!