I wish school would drag on. One period left before I had to head home. My friend Stacy, comes over to me. "Lily, how are you? I haven't seen you in a while. How are you?" "Oh you now the normal." What was i supposed to say? My brother abuses me and I can't come to school because some of my injuries are severe. "Well i better get to class. See ya tomorrow, Lily:)" " Maybe", I was thinking. "Yeah see ya." So the last bell rang and it sounded like a death bell. I walk through the halls and out the front door only to see my brother in his car out front. "What the hell is he doing here, i thought. Walked over to the car. "What are you doing here?" she said suspiciously. "Hop in." he said sternly. So I thought about running away, but he could out run me. So I hop in. We drive for about 5 minutes and I finally worked up the courage to ask. "Where are we going?" "None of your business!" he snapped. He stops the car and gets out. "Stay put." I have this secret and I'm afraid noone will love me if I tell it. It's the reason that Drake hates me. When I was 13 my parents died, Drake blames me for thier death. They were coming to my piano recital and they were hit. It was an accent, but my brother doesn't see it that way. I get out against his will. I see a boy with the prettiest blond hair and he's laughing with his buddies. He looks over my way and smiles. drake grabs my neck and starts shaking me. "I told you to stay in the car!" He slams me against the car. The 5 boys come over and take hold of my brother. The blond boy bends down and i wince afraid he's going to hurt me too. "Are you okay." he said with an irish accent. "Yeah I'm fine." Drake gives me the meanest look ever. It sent chills down my spine. I got his message loud and clear. This isn't over.

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