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The Carrot Lover

Chapter Twenty One

I was standing on top of a building. Why? I was afraid of heights. Then all of a sudden, I was pushed. I fell and let a scream escape my mouth. I saw a hand and I grabbed it. The hand pulled me up, and I was trying to see the mans face. It was Louis. I looked down and I saw my mother evily grinning at me. I could either let go and go to my mother or stay with Louis. Louis' grip started to loosen, and I started to slip. I pulled myself up and I looked into his eyes. It was at that moment I saw many emotions clouding his vision. Then when we kissed I saw nothing. Suddenly I heard a voice saying,

"If you can hear me move one of your fingers."

It was a lot like Louis' voice. Wait was it Louis' voice? I decided to move my left index finger. Then I heard Louis' voice say,

"Can you try to open your eyes?"

I tried with all my might to open my eyes but I couldn't. So I squeezed Louis' hand and tried again. This time I was successful. I saw Louis' tear stained face looking back at me.

A doctor came in and pushed Louis out. He asked me a few questions, and said that I was very lucky to not suffer amnesia after being in a coma for 13 days. Wow.

"Excuse me Dr. Stallings? Is the baby alright?" I asked.

"Surprisingly, yes!"

"Does Louis know yet?" I asked.

"No, but I'll send him in." Dr. Stallings replied and quickly hurried out. Louis came in and I said,

"Louis if I was pregnant with your child would you stop caring about me?"

"No. I won't. And remember, I never stopped caring. It was all Simon's fault." Louis said.

"Emma why did you ask that question?" Louis said, referring to my question about the pregnancy.

"Because-I'm-Kinda-Pregnant-With-Your-Child" I said, all in one breath.

Then Louis' lips are pressed to mine and all the pain I ever felt dissolves into nothing.

Notes

Yay they finally got back together! Or did they? We don't know yet. Hope you guys are having a great summer!
-Heather
xoxo

Comments

Like the first chapter - again lol!

@Mrs. Storplikson

I am rewriting the story :)

They only know each other for three days, and they have sex? It's pretty stupid. You should rewrite the whole story. I'll read it then. SO FIX IT PLEASE! ITS ANNOYING ME! DO IT ONCE U GET THIS!

@hollipop_the_writer

All you have to do is update often. And then views are something you get over time. I was doing this story since February and finished it in September.
@Carrotlover
Maybe it was meant to be... or not. Anyway could you be a fantasmic person and read my 1st fanfic called Speak UP. I want it to be really popular (like yours... btw how did you get sooo many views!?!)