AUTHOR'S NOTE (annoying fanfic moments, story reviews, random notes and SONG REVIEWS)
STORY REVIEW: BALLET AND LUST
WOW. JUST WOW. Your story is perfect, I can really visualise everything you describe! I'm not really a huge fan of stories like that, but this one blew my mind! Although I could (unfortunately) only read two choapters, I loved it. When I am not sobusy I will read the whole thing. You may notice you have one more subscriber:P However, sometimes, when a person is talking, you forget to close the speech marks and it's as if they're still talking. Just watch that;)
My Ratings:
Grammar: 9.5
Detail: 10
Interesting-ness: 10
Want to carry on Reading: 10
overall: 10
<3
For thhose of you who want to read Ballet And Lust, here's the link: (it's by ChloeSpark) http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/47336/Ballet-and-Lust/
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@Frogalaxy
Thanks so much, I listened to Overload and they're just so *o*
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8/28/14