Reviews and Other Quirks *On Hold
Review #1
Book: The World Has Changed
Author: Bmo_Tomlinson
Rating: 9.8
Cover Rating: 10
Good job! I actually had to mentally slap myself to stop and write this review.
But, it wasn't perfect. (Don't take it personally. No book I've read yet has been perfect)
Quirks (see why I called my book Reviews and Other Quirks? Sorry, lame joke):
More detail. You did a pretty good job. But, left some things out.
Like, where are the parents? What did the zombie look like? What did the sister do when the zombie almost killed her?
You know?
A little punctuation, no biggie. Other than that, you gained a subscriber!
Notes
Review #1 of Reviews and Other Quirks.
Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !
7/4/14