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Percy Jackson/1D And The Creators Horn

(Louis) Coming To A Close

Louis

Louis hunched over in the circle, tears streamed down his face. Wretched sobs filled the cave.
Louis rocked back and forth, trying to keep it all in. When would this nightmare end? People died in front of him, over and over again. People that were already dead, his Parents and people who were hopefully still alive, his friends.

His hands gripped his head, trying to stop the nightmares from haunting him, his body shivering.

Its not real!

He didn't know how many times he reapeted this to himself but it didn't stop the agony that was ripped inside him. Then he heard that creepy voice again "Come on Demigod, theres only way to stop the suffering, step out of the circle"

Louis croaked "N-no!" His voice wavering and cracking.

He couldn't go out of that circle...he'd never be able to help his friends if he was killed.
But they're dead, I watched them die. No! They were illusions remember? Its not real!
But it looked so real. Felt so real. How many times can you see your worst nightmares and the lines between reality and illusions become blurred?

Louis cluched his head, his hands running through his hair and tugging on it in frustration and pure emotional stress. Even when he closed his eyes he could see everyone he loved dying.
It was to much.

"Louis? My baby? Help me!" His mothers screams came from the air, Louis kept his eyes closed, a tear leaking from his eyes as he knew the illusion of his mother was being ripped apart then...

Screams of everyone he loved followed...

"Louis!"

"Help us!"

"It hurts..."

"Help!"

"This is all your fault!"

"Its killing us!"


"Come on Louis help them, its easy, just step out of the circle" The voice sneered in his head, mockingly.

"Why won't you help us!! I thought we were family!"

"I thought we were friends!"

"SHUT UP!!!" Louis screamed, snapping, feeling every demon inside him break and tear at his soul, as he opened his eyes and stood up on trembling legs, his whole body was trembling.

Louis repeated with grief and desperation though more quitly as he stared at the illusions of the four demigods, Zayn, Harry, Niall and Liam "J-just shut up!"

Zayn's body suddenly shook and he fell to the floor, looking dead. Blood poured out of a still standing Liams stomach. Harry couthed and blood came from his mouth as he choked "W-we're dying, why won't you help us?"

Suddenly the air suddenly became colder and the voice sneered in Louis's head "You will step out of the circle"

It took all of his will power as Louis said weakly "No."

The voice laughed icily as it said "Then you give me no choice"

Everything happened so quickly, suddenly Nialls illusion stepped forward, his eyes suddenly taking on a eerie gold colour and, He stepped over the circle!

Louis backed up "What the- B-but the circle..." Louis choked in shock and terror.

Niallsuddenlylaughedcoldly, andheopenedhismouthandthevoicethathadbeeninsideLouis'sheadcameoutfromit "I grow tired of these childish games, you really didn't think I couldn't cross a circle? Ha! You're only hear for me to feed from your fear, all your friends are here to let me feed on their fear. Don't you get it young Demigod? Why no one has ever escaped this maze? The tests aren't designed to test you! They are designed to kil you! These aren't tests! They're death traps!"

Louis knees buckled underneath him, everything was hopeless, he was going to die here.

"Then why?" Louis whispered "Why do all this when you could of killed me? Why make me, why make every other demigod that dies here, see all that before you kill them?"

ItsneeredstillusingNiallillusionsmouth "Why not? Its fun to wach demigods turn insane slowly, watching them sink into maddness because of their own fears. Watch the fight leave them, most are useaully a gibbering mess when I walk through the circle, I brake them then they turn insane"

Louis said softly, his voice weak "I'm not insane"

ItchuckledandNiallsillusionbentdown, Louisdidn'tmoveasithissed "True but I have broken you haven't I? I can see it, there is no will in you any more, no spirit. If I killed you right now and I am going to kill you quite soon. You would not struggle or fight becouse you can't, because you are broken and a few more minutes of me pretending killing the ones you hold dear would of turned you mad"

Louis didn't argue, knowing what he said was true. He could feel his grasp on the real world start to fade, a few moments before he shouted at the illusions to shut up and now he felt utterly hopeless and defeated. So weak and so willing to let the voice kill him, to stop the scenes of everyone dying that was still being replayed in his head, even now it played and he couldn't stop it.

It smirked "Good bye Halfling"

Before Louis could ask about the strange term as he'd never been called an halfling before, only half blood and Demigod then Nialls mouth suddenly opened and, his teeth! They were sharp like razers and a strange golden smoke started to come from his mouth.

"No, you can't be here! The gods forbid it!!" Niallsillusionsuddenlyscreeched.

Louis gaped as Nialls illusion stumbled backwards then disappeared. He then heard the voice in his head again but it sounded, terrified "You can't be here! You can't! You're Banished!"

Louis let out a gasp of pain and covered his ears as another voice responded but it just wasn't in his head, it came from all around, pure power radiated from the voice. Louis felt a slight head ache coming on just listerining to the ancient, strong and powerful voice, which seemed to come from all around him.

"I am not aloud in the gods territory, this is not their territory but yours, and I have agreed on no such thing with you"

"You can't be here" The voice whispered.

"You have one of my own, and his friends trapped in this gods forsaken place and the only weapon that will allow me to come back fully to the gods remain, is inside your death trap. You really believed on childish hope I wouldn't come?"

The illusions of his dying friends disappeared and a strange dark presence in his mind that he only just reconised when it was gone.

"Cowards always run"

"What is going on?" Louis asked tiredly, the fact that no one was killing themselves in front of him and the dark presence in his mind was gone making him feel giddy and light headed.

"You must come with me yound demigod, I looked forward to meet you, after you guessed who he was first but I wish the situation had been a better one. The death that the creature has made you see will cause many cracks in your mind to appear, your friends must help you through it"

"What are you talking about?" Louis asked weakly, wondering if this was some kind of trick.

The being said sorrowfully "I'm sorry son of the Sky but you will develop, I believe mortals call it PTSD, you must keep your friends close"

"Who are you?" Louis asked, suddenly feeling like he was going to faint and mostly ignoring what the mysterios being just said.

Before everything went black the beings response was just as confusing "I am everthing yet I am nothing..."
Louis fell into darkness but the ghost memory of his screaming and dying friends and family followed him, they would always folllow him...

Notes

I think Louis has drawn the shorts straw from these tests, or death traps ;) Yes they are not really tests, each demigod if they had not been saved by (The mysterious being, can you guess who he is?) Would of ended up dead, and yes I am that cruel, unfotauntely and fortunately for you I need them for my sequel. Well one of them I don't need, you'll find out who's going to die soon, yes someone is going to die ;)

Ps Can you guess the mysterious person is who has saved, Niall, Liam and now Louis? Give it a guess and tell me what you think of poor Louis mind torcher ;)

Thats it for now, I'll update more later in the night or tomorrow :D

Comments

@Awesome_girl_123
Thank you so much :D :D Thank you for commenting :D
I'm so glad you like it :)) xxx

This is one of the best stories I've read in a while!! Thank you so much for writing this!

@Piper charms
Your welcome !!!

@aimeevampirefiction
Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D

I love this story it's amazing