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Percy Jackson/1D And The Creators Horn

It Broke Me

Louis

Silence.

Silence all around.

A strange tension gripped the air.

Louis felt like he was suffocating with tension and suspense.

He just wanted to get it over with already.

Do something! His mind screamed at the voice in his head.

Then Louis stiffened as her heard footsteps coming his way and some fast breathing.

Louis's eyes widened as suddenly Harry came round the corner?

The 13 year old boy was running then he tripped, he looked panick stricken as he yelled "Louis help me! Help me!"

As something huge, dark and slimy slithered came round the corner and it was heading for Harry?

It looked like some sort of serpants, its mouth held thousands of teeth, it looked like a sharks mouth with thousands of rows of teeth. Louis was just about to step outside the circle to help Harry but he stiffened, what if this was some sort of illusion?

Louis remembered what had happened in that mist up on the moutain, maybe the same thing was happening? But how can I be sure? Louis thought panaking, how can I be sure he an illusion?

"Louis help" Harry screamed, Louis felt like his feat were frozen, he couldn't move! To scared to move, to panicked to move. He couldn't let himself be fooled again Louis thought as he watched the monster slither closer and closer to Harry.

Louis closed his eyes.

Harry's doing another bit of this Maze, its not him.

Its not him.

Its not him!


That was he believed, thats what he had to believe.

Louis stumbled backwards "You're not real" Louis said shakily.

"Help" Harry pleaded and the creature was an inch away from him, it hissed menacingly then Louis watched, horrified as it grabbed Harry's leg by its teeth that sunk in deep, blood flowed out of the wound. Harry screamed in agony.

Louis shut his eyes closed and kept on repeating "You're not real, you're not real"

That didn't shut of Harry's wretched screams as the monster eat him alive and the stench of blood.

His not real.

Its not real.

Its not real!

Then suddenly Harry's screams were cut of and all Louis could hear was silence, when he opened his eyes fearfully, his knees buckled beneath him as he staired into the monster and Harry's head sticking out of the monsters mouth.

His face covered in blood, his mouth open in a silent scream and his eyes staring at something Louis couldn't see.

Louis whimpered "H-harry...?"

Just as he said this the monster's image suddenly shook then dissapeared with Harry. Louis let out a huge breath of relief and a couple of tears trickled down his face. Then he heard that voice again, it was laughing "Almost got you Demigod, almost got you, shame you didn't fall for my trickery but I think I know how to break you now..."

With that said Louis in the next hour witnessed all of his nightmares at once. Louis could only curl up in a ball then rock back and forth repeating out loud, even when his voice was so dry he could barly talk "It's not real...I-its not real, It's n-not r-real. I'ts not...real, its not real"

Its not real.. .

Its not real...
Its not real...
Its not real...
Its not real.. .
Its not real!
ITS NOT REAL
ITS NOT REAL!

Louis felt like something was tearing him apart from the outside.

Soon his knees bent and his hair ragged with sweat and grime.

Hulidinations haunted him, his friends and family whispering hate and depressive thoughts in his ears.

Family taunting him.

His friends lying on the floor dead.

Watching his mother being torn apart with the dreaded voice telling him he could only stop her pain if he stepped out of the circle. It felt like he was in that circle for years...

It was to much...

All to much!

It broke him down, there's only so much mental torment someone can take...

And the laughing, the laughing from the voice in his head "You'll brake soon Demigod, they always do!"

But what the voice didn't know, Louis had already broke inside...

Notes

Poor Louis, Yeah, I believe Louis is going to need some theorpy after this..

We're getting closer to the end people! Hope you liked it so far ;)

Well...not really liked it because Louis is getting metally torchered to insanity, oh you know what I mean ;)

Comments

@Awesome_girl_123
Thank you so much :D :D Thank you for commenting :D
I'm so glad you like it :)) xxx

This is one of the best stories I've read in a while!! Thank you so much for writing this!

@Piper charms
Your welcome !!!

@aimeevampirefiction
Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D

I love this story it's amazing