Louis

I was in a small cave like tunnel, two doors were infront of me, they both had the death rate numbers by their sides.

The Door to the right showed "2, 4000" People had entered and 2, 3195 had come out alive.
The Door to the left showed "5000" people had entered and 4240 had come out.

My maths was crap so I decided to pick the left door but as I walked in and the door shut behind me I failed to notice something extremely important. There was a lot of dirt on the numbers that had calved into the doors, in fact as I shut the door some dirt near the numbers fell of. The number that was now left was 50000, I hadn't seen the zero on the end.

Thomas appeared before me and said "This test is called The Demons Inside"

What a lovely title I thought...

I was inside another cave like tunnel but it seemed smaller and I had to bend my head to get through, I felt extremely cramped.

Thomas said "This part of the Maze is not a physical activity, rather a metal one, you hallucinate, you will be shown your deepest fears. You will be forced to fight with your will power and nothing else, you will be torchered from the inside"

I gulped "Sounds, lovely"

Thomas grunted "Just try and keep sane and you'll be fine"

Supportive much?

Thomas then disappeared leaving me alone.

Okay Maze, lets see what you've got...

I felt a sudden chill in the air, goose bumps road up on my skin and my breathing quickened, something moved out of the corner of my eye, I spun around, nothing there.

The shadows on the walls seemed to increase in size making it seem even darker. I felt paralysed I tried to move but my feet wouldn't allow me to, it was like my muscles had seized up. What was going on? I'd already been in here for about a couple of seconds and already my fear was getting the best of me.

I heard a slithering sound behind me, like a cloak trailing along the floor. One things for sure, I knew wasn't alone anymore.

(Poor sweet demigod, all alone, lost, no one to help you)
A voice hissed, I jumped, the voice! It wasn't being spoken! The voice was in my head!

(Very clever little hero) The voice crooned.

Out of the corner of my eye I saw a shadow of a hand along the walls, reaching out for me, I gasped and blinked then the shadow of the hand was gone.

"What are you?" I asked, my voice cracking.

(I'm everything you think, dream and talk about, anything creepy your brain has thought up over the years, didn't you know little Demigod? This is all in your mind after all)
So its not real? No! That doesn't make sense! I'm not insane. I don't feel any different apart from the fear pumping through my body.

I said shakily "So is this happening inside my head? You can't hurt me? It's not real-"

(Of course this is happening inside your head but why on earth should that mean its not real?"The voice asked mockingly.

I backed away then a sharp pang in my gut stopped me, I suddenly had the urge to look down, I glanced down to see, I was in a circle? Something like red paint and salt seemed to have been sprayed around me, it was a perfect circle and I was in the middle of it, what on earth?
I saw my foot was near the red line of the circle. I moved my foot over the red line and NO! A pain sliced thought me making me stumble back into the circle, my head felt like it was screaming No!! I'm not sure what but something told me not to move out of the circle.

( Again, very clever little hero)The dark voice whispered in my head.

I shuddered then spun around as a crunch of crumbling stones, rattled near me, like someone or something had stepped on them. I wiped my brow as sweat started to drip down my forehead and my hands started to feel clammy, taking a deep breath I yelled "Who's there! Show yourself!"

My voice echoed along the walls then...silence. Then a sudden animalistic growl thundered through the cave, making the ground vibrate and my eyes widened in terror as I stared into the eyes of a black muscled beast, it slithered around the corner, its tail like serpants, leading upwards was its chest and thin bony arms, no legs in site, its tale propelling it forward, its mouth dripping with serliver and its eyes a blood shot red.

What in Hades was that thing?

I felt a slight pull in my gut and a tingly feeling like pines and needles in my hands, I glanced down to see white strips of electricity threading through my fingers, there was no time to get my bow and arrow out.

I backed up, almost going out of the circle but again something stopped me, whatever you do stay in the circle! A powerful voice ordered inside my head making me cringe in pain, for a second I thought I recognised the voice of a god, someone extremely familer then the voice was gone and all my focus went on to the monster in front of me.

The Monster headed straight for me and all I could do was pray that it wasn't immune to lightning as the sparks of electricity threading thought my hands grow in size and power.

Just as it was about to come to close for comfort, its arms stretched out, I aimed my powers straight at its chest. Here goes nothing...Please work! I let my powers loose then, No! No! How could that be possible?

The Lighting went through the beasts chest? Like the monster was a ghost., like it wasn't...really there. It let out a roar of triumph then slid closer to me then something, astonishing happened, before I could react as soon as the beasts monstrous body went over the red line of the circle it...Vanished? But that was impossible! And yet it had happened.

Then the ground rumbled and rocks fell down from the circling, they were coming right at me! I was to shocked to move then like the monster they vanished, an understanding dawed on me, everything vanished once it was near the circle. This must be a test of bravery and nerve.

The maze would make things of my nightmares come alive and come straight at me but as long as I was standing up to it, not moving from this circle I was save, I think.

Suddenly that strange voice echoed inside my head "Very good Hero, though all hero's have a fear that will make them break, cower and back away, it won't be long intill I find yours"

Bring it on I thought grimly, this was going to take a while.

Notes

Louis will have the worst experience in the maze out of the four others. It'll get very creepy for him and will change him the most out of everybody else :) I know I'm evil, hehe.

Though there are small hints at what will happen in the future scattered around the Maze, a big one in Harry's pov, though it'll be so small you may not notice it.

And there was especially huge hints that you probably noticed with Liams pov ;)

What do you think? Let me know, remember to comment :D