New Girl
Chapter 7
Naomi p.o.v
What the hell was his problem? I can't do that project with him. Or I have to go to Jack in the crack and stay there until they are gone.
I guess I'm gonna have to live with it.
I hear footsteps behind me. I don't want to turn around, so don't.
"Oi, Naomi!" He says, with his thick Irish accent.
I turn around, with tears streaming down my face still and say, "I don't care what you have to say Niall. I really don't. So shut up, and leave me alone please."
"But-"
"No buts Niall. Leave me alone! Please!" I yell.
"I-i need to say something!" He says.
"Fine." I give in.
"I'm so, so, so, sorry! I didn't know! Please forgive me?" He apologizes.
"You know Niall, I don't accept apologies like that. That whole thing just happened five minutes ago! Seriously Niall, use common sense!" I yell, and run away from him.
The bell rings for lunch, so I walk to the lunch room.
When I'm walking, I notice something.
Notes
So, what did she notice?
Will she forgive Niall?
And why is she so mad at Niall?
And if you answer these, I'LL BE YOUR BEST FRIEND!!
Hey so here's my review for this one:
Could be a bit more descriptive , tends to be a bit to much talking and confusing on who is talking at the moment or who "she" is but I'm sure you are getting better as you go on. Other than all of that its a pretty good story line
6/18/14