New Girl
Notice!
Ok, so just tellin ya, I will delete any 'When me wills update' after I update after it. I will actually delete the chapter, then start a new one. That's about it I guess! So, I will also update later on, so I will keep this notice chapter up forever I guess. So peace my lovelys!
Notes
~Naomi
Hey so here's my review for this one:
Could be a bit more descriptive , tends to be a bit to much talking and confusing on who is talking at the moment or who "she" is but I'm sure you are getting better as you go on. Other than all of that its a pretty good story line
6/18/14