New Girl
Chapter 14
Niall p.o.v.
Why is this dresser so freaking heavy? Does she have a collection of rocks or something? I keep trying to get the thing off of me before this level gets destroyed. I hear footsteps coming up the stairs, and they are soon in the hallway. The rumbling is still going. Someone turns into the room, with two other people behind.
"We're going to get you out, don't worry," someone says, walking to me. I can't make them out, due to the smoke from I think was the explosion I heard. It got in my eyes and I can't see. I can feel the dresser being lifted up a little, and dropped again.
"Help!" The person yells, and the two other people come running over, and try to get it off, but fail.
"Hold on," the person says-well, let's call her a girl-, and gets her phone out. She types in a number, and talks for a minute, and puts her phone in her pocket. How the he'll did she call someone if there is an earthquake going on?
I hear a car pull up, but it could be for anyone. Footsteps come up the stairs.
"Oh my God!" Some man says, and runs-scratch that-wobbles over here, because the ground is still shaking. The other three people come over and help the guy lift up the dresser. It gets picked up, thrown across the room and smashed. The girl lifts me up.
"Niall, can you see?" She asks. How does she know my name?
"No," I answer.
"Rub your eyes," she instructs. I rub my eyes as told. I can see better now, and Naomi is carrying me, Harry,Louis, and Zayn helped Naomi with getting me out. I think Harry threw the dresser though, because he wasn't here before. We get out side, and Naomi sets me down on the grass.
"Thank you Naomi, I owe you," I say.
"No Niall, thank you, you saved me first," she points out.
Notes
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Hey so here's my review for this one:
Could be a bit more descriptive , tends to be a bit to much talking and confusing on who is talking at the moment or who "she" is but I'm sure you are getting better as you go on. Other than all of that its a pretty good story line
6/18/14