New Girl
Chapter 1
Naomi p.o.v.
I walk into the school, but I don't expect to be smothered with questions.
"Hi! I'm Nicole Malish! What's your name?" Someone asks walking up to me.
"I'm Naomi Palmer, and go away." I says, walking away.
"But I wanna be your friend!" She yells.
"This is my, 'I don't care' face." I say.
"Come on, please?" She begs.
"Why do you want to be my friend? You probably have all the friends you want, because of that pretty face of yours." I point out.
"Y-you think I'm pretty?" She asks.
"Well, yea! Have you ever looked in the mirror?" I ask.
"Yo nerd! Who you talkin to? No one?" Some other girl laughs.
"Yo slut! Are you gonna shut the hell up?" I ask.
"Oh, who's this? Your body guard?" She giggles.
"Ok, so, I've only known this girl for five minutes, and she is pretty cool" I say.
"Do you really think I care if she's 'cool'? No, I don't so, leave us alone." She snaps.
"Oh, but you came up to us first!" I yell.
"Well, go some-"
"Well, ya know what? Leave US alone. Bullies are the one things I hate the most. So leave." I snap at her.
"Oh, you can NOT talk to me that way!" She shouts.
"Is 'Oh' the only word you know? Cause it seems like it." I say.
The she looks at me with an 'eye' and it creeps me out after about ten minutes.
"Lets go, she's scaring me." I whisper.
"Oh, so now I scare you?"
"YOU SAID OH AGAIN!! Stop it!" I yell.
"Um, I asked you, a question!" She says sassily.
"Ahem? Everyone knows I'm the sassy masta of Doncasta!" A new voice says.
"Great! Please, join the party kid!" I yell sarcastically.
I look back over to this bitch and her group, and I notice one of her friends are staring at me.
"What are you lookin at, stare balls?!" I yell. I just came up with that one. He looks down and blushes.
"Now, leave so I can get to class." I say, and push bitch out of the way.
"Wow, stop being a bitch!" She yells.
"Ok, so, now I'm the bitch?" I ask.
"You always were!" She yells.
Big mistake bitch. Big, mistake.
Notes
First chapter!! I've been thinking about this book a lot, but I never had a title. So, I found one, and here it is!! Please tell me how you like it!! :)
Hey so here's my review for this one:
Could be a bit more descriptive , tends to be a bit to much talking and confusing on who is talking at the moment or who "she" is but I'm sure you are getting better as you go on. Other than all of that its a pretty good story line
6/18/14