Looking Forward by harryfanficlovehazza


It has a great summary that makes me want to read the first chapter. The story line looks very well thought out. But my favorite thing about it is that, it doesn't start off like all the other Bad Boy/Good Girl stories.

It slowly develops into it and that's what I like! They're not snogging already in chapter 4. Lol. You took time to let the readers , as I say , Inhale the Detail.

Especially the newly updated chapter! I'm not going to spoil it for the others but I really liked it! It's not cheesy or anything but it actually makes your heart melt! I'm very surprised you wrote this yourself!<3


Buuutt...... Be VERY CAREFUL on your spacing. It's good but there are some kinks in there.


I have to say, you have a new subscriber!(;


Good luck honeybunny! Keep writing!

Notes

I'm not trying to be rude or offensive in anyway possible. So if you have a problem do not complain. You're the one who asked for a review. Other than that, have a good day!<3


~Megan~