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Shrimp Fest?
Story: Shrimp Fest?
Comment: Ok firstly I like the plot and all but you have vocabulary problems! Plz fix it AND punctuation, commas should be there to separate sentences and fullstops. Grammar is okay. Be careful! Add some more cliffhangers and it'd be better if the paragraphs were spaced out a a bit more. I like your story but you just need to fix vocabulary errors and punctuation. Review your chapter before you update it.
Rating: 6/10. Good job but can do better.
Comment: Ok firstly I like the plot and all but you have vocabulary problems! Plz fix it AND punctuation, commas should be there to separate sentences and fullstops. Grammar is okay. Be careful! Add some more cliffhangers and it'd be better if the paragraphs were spaced out a a bit more. I like your story but you just need to fix vocabulary errors and punctuation. Review your chapter before you update it.
Rating: 6/10. Good job but can do better.
Can some one review my story I survived with 1D or midnight memories? I survived with 1D is longer. It has 17-19 chapters. Midnight Memories is only 3-4 chapters long. I would appreciate it! Thanks!
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