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I'm Done Hiding
Story: I'm Done Hiding
Comment: tell you the truth I've never really been a fan of Larry Stylinson fanfics but this one has a good plot. No grammar mistakes or punctuation. But I would recommend more attractive vocabulary. Oh and slow the hell down dude! I mean it's already chapter 2 and they are already kissing!! The hell! Make the readers wait and frustrated. The more they wait, the more they get so curious to know when will they kiss and they'll literary killing themselves. Use more Cliffhangers which makes the readers curious.
Rating:7/10. Good job but can do better!
Comment: tell you the truth I've never really been a fan of Larry Stylinson fanfics but this one has a good plot. No grammar mistakes or punctuation. But I would recommend more attractive vocabulary. Oh and slow the hell down dude! I mean it's already chapter 2 and they are already kissing!! The hell! Make the readers wait and frustrated. The more they wait, the more they get so curious to know when will they kiss and they'll literary killing themselves. Use more Cliffhangers which makes the readers curious.
Rating:7/10. Good job but can do better!
Can some one review my story I survived with 1D or midnight memories? I survived with 1D is longer. It has 17-19 chapters. Midnight Memories is only 3-4 chapters long. I would appreciate it! Thanks!
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