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Dollhouse
Story: Dollhouse
Comment: I've always loved stories about ghosts, vampires and werewolfs. Your story is one of the best supernatural story I've read. It's really great. You have few spelling errors but that's okay. Grammar and punctuation is good, all I could say is keep writing this story. Oh and don't start by introducing the character like 'Hi I am....'it sounds cliche, it's better when it's a mystery and people find out themselves in the story, it gives them curiosity about finding the characters personality.
Rating: 8/10!! Great job
Comment: I've always loved stories about ghosts, vampires and werewolfs. Your story is one of the best supernatural story I've read. It's really great. You have few spelling errors but that's okay. Grammar and punctuation is good, all I could say is keep writing this story. Oh and don't start by introducing the character like 'Hi I am....'it sounds cliche, it's better when it's a mystery and people find out themselves in the story, it gives them curiosity about finding the characters personality.
Rating: 8/10!! Great job
Can some one review my story I survived with 1D or midnight memories? I survived with 1D is longer. It has 17-19 chapters. Midnight Memories is only 3-4 chapters long. I would appreciate it! Thanks!
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