Fanfiction Writing Club!
Heartbreaker
Heartbreaker . Here is what I think: 1)1) Your story is great! It's unique, not same old ideas, it's usually the boys who are heartbreakers but this time it's a girl and I like it! basically it's one of a kind! I like the story plot!
2)Your grammar and punctuation is perfect. No spelling mistakes which is good!
3)My only advice to you is to leave space between the paragraphs, it's better.
4) All in all, I'm predicting this story is going in a great way,people will love it! Keep writing!!
Rating: 10/10!!! Ur a great author! Keep it up :)
2)Your grammar and punctuation is perfect. No spelling mistakes which is good!
3)My only advice to you is to leave space between the paragraphs, it's better.
4) All in all, I'm predicting this story is going in a great way,people will love it! Keep writing!!
Rating: 10/10!!! Ur a great author! Keep it up :)
Can some one review my story I survived with 1D or midnight memories? I survived with 1D is longer. It has 17-19 chapters. Midnight Memories is only 3-4 chapters long. I would appreciate it! Thanks!
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