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One Direction Grown Ups
One Direction Grown Ups Here is what I think: 1) I like how One Direction are grown ups and have their own children. Your plot is awesome!
2)You have very few spelling errors but i'd let that go because there aren't really many.
3)just an advice, please space out the paragraphs. People don't like it cramped up.
4)I must say you have a new subscriber! Keep writing and update soon xox
Rating: 10/10!! Congrats!!(Story link above)
2)You have very few spelling errors but i'd let that go because there aren't really many.
3)just an advice, please space out the paragraphs. People don't like it cramped up.
4)I must say you have a new subscriber! Keep writing and update soon xox
Rating: 10/10!! Congrats!!(Story link above)
Can some one review my story I survived with 1D or midnight memories? I survived with 1D is longer. It has 17-19 chapters. Midnight Memories is only 3-4 chapters long. I would appreciate it! Thanks!
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