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Alter
Author: wonderful.
Rate: 10
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. You put incredible detail and emotion that most other stories lack into your story. Anyone can write and say that his or her main character is broken or depressed, but not everyone can actually show just how that person is broken and worn out like you have done.
While reading, I felt like I could almost feel exactly how you were describing your characters’ emotions. I felt as if became the characters and the characters became me. I could actually feel, imagine what they feel that is, what your characters were feeling where in most stories, I would just read about the supposed broken girl who in reality has all of her shit together and just labels herself as that.
Then, there was the plot itself. You can probably already tell that I’ve read a shit ton of stories about people being broken down and torn apart, but those stories have nothing on yours. Your plot really flows, and you don’t rush into thing. You take time to explain things and I really like what you’ve done with this sort of plot line. In fact, it’s actually not like any sort of plot line that I’ve read, and I definitely love it.
Overall, your story is a must read for everyone. I completely recommend it to people looking for great, unique stories to read. I’ve hit subscribe myself and look forward to reading more.
If you find your review to be disappointing, I cannot honestly tell you that I’m sorry. Do not let what I say in any way discourage you from writing or anything for that matter. I am just one person with strongly opinionated views on everything. If I made it clear that I strongly dislike your story, do not think that other people won’t enjoy it. There are many other readers with different views than me who will find interest in your story where I may not have. I hope you do take something out of this and improve on and continue your writing, but if you don’t, that’s fine too.
Author: wonderful.
Rate: 10
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. You put incredible detail and emotion that most other stories lack into your story. Anyone can write and say that his or her main character is broken or depressed, but not everyone can actually show just how that person is broken and worn out like you have done.
While reading, I felt like I could almost feel exactly how you were describing your characters’ emotions. I felt as if became the characters and the characters became me. I could actually feel, imagine what they feel that is, what your characters were feeling where in most stories, I would just read about the supposed broken girl who in reality has all of her shit together and just labels herself as that.
Then, there was the plot itself. You can probably already tell that I’ve read a shit ton of stories about people being broken down and torn apart, but those stories have nothing on yours. Your plot really flows, and you don’t rush into thing. You take time to explain things and I really like what you’ve done with this sort of plot line. In fact, it’s actually not like any sort of plot line that I’ve read, and I definitely love it.
Overall, your story is a must read for everyone. I completely recommend it to people looking for great, unique stories to read. I’ve hit subscribe myself and look forward to reading more.
If you find your review to be disappointing, I cannot honestly tell you that I’m sorry. Do not let what I say in any way discourage you from writing or anything for that matter. I am just one person with strongly opinionated views on everything. If I made it clear that I strongly dislike your story, do not think that other people won’t enjoy it. There are many other readers with different views than me who will find interest in your story where I may not have. I hope you do take something out of this and improve on and continue your writing, but if you don’t, that’s fine too.
Notes
Note to the author: I really want to apologize for taking too long to review Demented (even though I never actually ended up reviewing it). I was waiting until after I had reviewed It Takes Patience 1 & 2 because it’s so similar in context, but I haven’t reviewed those stories either due to either reasons, and I really don’t want to seem like a bitch for grabbing at the opportunity to not have to review your story because you said you honestly don’t care if I review it anymore. So again I’m really sorry about that.
@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16