Fanfiction 101
The Moon’s True Light
(1) Your spelling was okay, your punctuation was eh, but you don’t need to start a new paragraph after every sentence. You could use a little more detail. Don’t use caps when people are yelling; exclamation points are just fine. I really didn’t like the whole conversation they had about the author writing about them. There are way too many points of view for my liking, extremely annoying especially when they are the same event but just from a different character’s perspective.
The plot was different, but I’m not a big fan of it. Every boy likes her – typical. They are long lost siblings that reunite– typical. I feel that even though her boyfriend doesn’t allow her to listen to listen to any boy bands, she should know their full names because of all the awards shows and stuff she’s gone to; unless, of course, she’s the kind of star who doesn’t go to award shows – not that I know of any.
Overall, I didn’t really like it.
If you found this review to be disappointing, I'm can't say I'm sorry. As I said, I am a brutally honest person, or so people tell me. If you would like me to take this down, I will, just ask me. Don't bitch about it either; I don't care what you think, I'm just telling you what I think. Don't get mad, you asked for it. Don't rate this badly just because you don't like what I say. But on the off chance you like what I'm telling you, I'm glad you could learn something from me.
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12/31/16